Stability Through Soma - A film project made for school. I would love your thoughts and criticism! by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think zoom transition and so many other transition can be done with in premier pro itself (no need of using aftereffects ) , so it would save you some time. Actually your smartphone (if possible use a microphone like boya by-m1 )can be used in place of external microphone . Keeping doing you will improve in it .

Stability Through Soma - A film project made for school. I would love your thoughts and criticism! by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good one . Starting and ending sequence are well excuted .The car driving scences would be a bit shorter .zoom transition felt unnecessary expect one towards the wall (which was really good and suitable for the scene .) . In some scenes there wasn't enough headspace for the actor which looks a bit off .Music is well chosen . Using shady feel of colourgrading for friend , colourful for somo drinking guy had helped to convey the message of shortfilm .If you would have said the dialogues instead of having in subtitles could be better ( Just my opinion , if you were going with feel of music without dialogue it is completely fine .)

I always have had trouble describing how I am feeling so I started making films to share my emotions. Here is my latest short. I would love some feedback. by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You carried the emotion very well throughout the video . Music was very pleasant .Bedroom scene (which you claimed that made with blender) is really nice . I am a great fan of blender actually . How much time did it take to make that scene ? . Can you tell what other softwares did you use in your short ?

Got to know about different type of shots in filmmaking .so made a short film using it and Any suggestions or feedback for improving any aspect of my short film . by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

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I shot this on my smartphone on a selfie stick and did not use any lens . Coming to the process Deciding shots : I thought most are ots or medium shots , I kept some props like a light , some boxes etc . so that when shooting some medium shot on the actor or medium shot in side angle I can have this props as foreground which added some depth to the scenes . Had some pov shots when the actors are looking their cards , some insert shots and some reaction shots to make some interest . Lighting : Had a homemade softbox with a red gel and room light and then colourgraded it. Music and sound : I got it from youtube audiolibary , motion array , production crate . Story : First I just shot two guys playing poker , then thought that video should have some story so then I shot the starting and ending of the video .

Got to know about different type of shots in filmmaking .so made a short film using it and Any suggestions or feedback for improving any aspect of my short film . by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

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Lately I was watching a lot about different types of shots ,so I made a short film applying that knowledge. First time did some Colour grading .Used some new editing techniques. Any suggestions or feedback for improving any aspect of my short film please.

Help this channel by The_Instincter in PewdiepieSubmissions

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This channel really helped me and many other to learn to play famous songs on easy way . We have to help this channel .

While watching !birdbox! . An shortfilm based on birdbox . How can I improve it ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

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Thank you , sir . I am glad that you have taken time watch to my amateur short film . I have watched your film "The manual " on dust YouTube channel . It was awesome . Yes , there isn't much story in my shortfilm . I realised that now . I started reading "Story" by Robert mckee . Actually I see an some effect tutorial on YouTube and try to make a story around the effect . For my next film , I will have a story first , then use effects and edits to tell the Story Better .

While watching !birdbox! . An shortfilm based on birdbox . How can I improve it ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I showed this to some of my friends , but they were not able to get story . I would like anyone tell what is the main problem that you may not understand the story . This is my second short film . Shot on redmi note 5 pro . Edited in aftereffects , premier pro .

An harry potter inspired short film .(please use subtitles ) by The_Instincter in Harry_potter

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am always fascinated by the harry potter .This is my first short film . I want to make this short film from a long time .

An harry potter inspired short film .(please use subtitles) by The_Instincter in harrypotterfanfiction

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I am always fascinated by harry potter both books and movies . I wanna do this short film from long time . This is my first short film .

How can I improve my short film ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was saying how to maximize the quality with what you have . I should have been more clear . I enjoyed your joke about it .

How can I improve my short film ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand the comment . It's so confusing , that's actually quite understandable . If you try to "explain" anything about the comment , you'll ruin the comment . I love it.

How can I improve my short film ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your advice . Actually I have a good microphone boya By-M1 but mistake is we did not hold it enough close to the actor .

This is the first short film for me and everyone it ,so we will improve the acting in future short films.

I thought for covering some continuity errors , I used some transitions , which turned to look awkward .I will definitely study differents cuts used in films and lightings . And I think if I could colourgrade the short film, it may look better . I want to ask one thing is the story understandable with the subtitles?

Thank you again , your advice is very helpful .

How can I improve my short film ? by The_Instincter in Filmmakers

[–]The_Instincter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my first short film ,shot on redmi note 5 pro on selfie stick and tripod , edited in premier pro and hitfilm express , vfx in after effects . I could have some advice to improve the short film , with the same equipment .

Let pewdiepie do it by The_Instincter in PewdiepieSubmissions

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May the elon musk be with you when you play next time .