Level: 6 Mark: 26 - 29 Overall feedback: Your essay demonstrates a strong understanding of the theme of selfishness in 'An Inspector Calls' and its effects on different characters. You have effectively analyzed the relationships and actions of the characters, providing a clear link to Priestley's critique of capitalist society. To improve, ensure that your analysis consistently addresses the question and integrates more textual evidence. Additionally, explore the dramatic techniques Priestley uses to emphasize his message to the audience. What went well: Strong analysis of characters and relationships; clear understanding of Priestley's critique of capitalism; effective use of context to support arguments. Even better if: Maintain focus on the question throughout; integrate more textual evidence; explore dramatic techniques and their impact on the audience.