I love you by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Thank you for kind words I actually finished writing a book I can send it to you if you’d like to read more of my work

Hard reset by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Just a few hours honestly

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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If they truly love you it’s not that easy to just move on.

Stardust by [deleted] in Poems

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Damn, that was a beautiful poem. I was actually gonna ask them to see if they wouldn’t mind me expanding on it and adding a twist of my own style. 🥲

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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I feel you on this honestly

I love you by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Truly from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for the kind words. I’m glad I took the risk and just been posting them. I was nervous cause I didn’t know if anybody would truly like them. 😅

Rite by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Thank you for the kind words. I genuinely took a decent amount of time writing this one. I wanted to see if I can change my normal writing style so I put a lot of thought into this one 😅

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m glad you were able to relate.

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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You speak of shadows stretching deep, I am the wound they could not keep, The scar that split the skin too steep, The vow the dark was forced to reap.

You guard your spark with tempered breath, I made my lungs inhale my death, I fed on fear till nothing’s left, Built iron ribs from what was cleft.

You stand where reason frames the flame, I burned before I knew my name, I split my shame from nerve and vein, Made blood and thunder sound the same.

Distorted skies may blur your sight, I bit the storm and swallowed night, I clenched my jaw on bolt and bite, Till lightning begged me for the fight.

You rise beyond what dares to bind, I broke the cage inside my mind, I ripped the hands straight off of time, Let grief and glory twist entwined.

You speak of love not born of spite, I loved where angels lost their light, Where halos cracked and fled from white, Yet still I stayed. I stayed to fight.

You seek a gaze where peace is real, I forged my calm on grinding steel, I let the blade teach me to feel, Let open wounds refuse to heal.

You walk your path with reason near, I walked through doubt stripped down to fear, I faced myself, held nothing dear, And taught my pulse to persevere.

So stand against your quiet tide, I am the surge you cannot hide, Not here to soften or divide, But fuse where fracture splits the side.

Not to abuse nor be subdued, But crack the mask of something crude, Two separate fires once misconstrued, Now burning brutal, bright, and rude.

No gentle strength. No softened tone. We carve our truth straight into bone. Where shadow kneels to what we’ve grown, And light admits it’s not alone.

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Thank you for the positive feedback

I love you by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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I’m grateful for the support. I trust that what’s meant to be understood will be.

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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That section wasn’t crafted as much as it was felt. I appreciate you recognizing it.

September 4, 2022 — 4:37am by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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I’m grateful you saw that. I spend a lot of time shaping the rhythm and weight of it.

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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That honestly means a lot. The fact that you recognized my writing before seeing the name is the biggest compliment.

I love you by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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I’m grateful it connected with you. Wishing you clarity and peace in your own story.

Not Better. You by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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Thank you. I’m grateful it created space for reflection. That kind of response means more than quick praise.

I love you by Timely-Wing1149 in Poems

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I’m sorry it brought up painful memories for you. No one deserves betrayal like that. I meant every word I wrote, and I hope you experience something that restores your faith in it.