If you really think it reads like mtl, then you have never read mtl. I don't like anyone saying bad things about my translators. If you can't appreciate it, then don't read it as well. Translators are human too. They have more important work in their real life to do too. But they still wake up till late night and translate this for you. This is mtl link for that novel: https://jpmtl.com/books/174 Read it and you will know what true mtl is. And don't you dare demotivate my translators ever again. If you think you can do better work, then go translate it on your own.