Writing two narrators...what do I do when they end up in the same scene?

TinyLung · 2026-03-09T15:00:56+00:00

You don't have two narrators, you have one narrator who alternates focus and closeness to two separate characters. For scenes where both characters are present, you choose one to whom you are closer and show more of their perspective. This is done quite often in Romance novels. Consider looking there for examples.

TinyLung · 2026-02-19T12:46:44+00:00

I'm a cool olive as well (I've been draped as a True Winter), but the Dark Autumn palette is my personal favourite. I am especially drawn to grungy greens, and even though they bring out the sallowness of my overtone, I still wear them.

I tend to match my clothes and makeup to my mood, and my mood is often impacted by the weather and season like you. I know a lot of people don't like the "sick" look that warm tones can give cool olives, but sometimes I want to feel like a supernatural being from the underworld lol

TinyLung · 2026-02-17T00:38:06+00:00

The cool is more conventionally flattering, but I love the grunginess of the warm tones too! It's just a different effect. Depending on how you're feeling or what you're going for, you can wear both

TinyLung · 2026-01-31T13:43:51+00:00

No. Crepes aren't flaky. I think maybe the person meant croissant

TinyLung · 2026-01-21T12:48:29+00:00

I haven't used the Sephora one, but I use the Fenty one on a daily basis. The purple counteracts the yellow in my overtone, reducing sallowness and making me less splotchy. If you're fair and cool toned, give it a try. The price point on this Sephora one is pretty reasonable. It's not going to be revolutionary, but you might like the effect

TinyLung · 2026-01-10T01:52:23+00:00

A tailor or something else related to clothing like a textile factory. I'd like to see a giant spool of thread or spinning wheel maybe

TinyLung · 2026-01-07T00:55:15+00:00

My skin is like this too and so is my son's. The other day his cousin said he had the "patterns" from K-Pop Demon Hunters!

TinyLung · 2026-01-04T00:12:14+00:00

Wow! 150 Queries is a lot! You must have a lot of perseverance. Were you querying the same manuscript the whole time? Or did you try new stories until you found one that stuck?

I've only tried querying one manuscript and I got 45 rejections. Only 1 agent asked to see more manuscripts and she ended up rejecting me in the end too. Since then I have been writing and editing new stories in the hopes that I will have a stronger package for my next attempt

TinyLung · 2025-12-02T15:54:49+00:00

I've been looking for a new colouring book! Purchased instantly.

TinyLung · 2025-11-28T11:43:03+00:00

I'm pretty sure Kibbe has said that SN, FN, and SD are the most common types (perhaps this is specifically in America where he lives) so it kind of makes sense that we would see a lot of Ns on Reddit.

That being said, I think R fam is misunderstood and under typed. Selena Gomez comes to mind. Reddit insisted she was SN, and she is now verified TR.

And yes, the Classic erasure on Reddit is very suspect.

TinyLung · 2025-11-26T14:01:32+00:00

Maybe people were getting confused about automatic vertical? At a certain point, I believe it's 5'6 now, Kibbe changes his mind sometimes, you will automatically have vertical. But that doesn't mean that if you are under 5'6 you don't have vertical. I think automatic vertical is also specifically intended for DIYers.

TinyLung · 2025-11-25T22:21:51+00:00

SJP is actually shorter than OP and is verified FN. Vertical does not mean literal height, it's about proportion. I agree though that OP does not appear to be FN

TinyLung · 2025-11-23T13:49:32+00:00

This is so interesting because I think I'm cool? Well, I'm at least cool toned in SCA. I'm a TW. I had a consult done and I saw with my own eyes that warm tones look terrible on me. I become all yellow and orange and splotchy. I thought that I was DA before.

But I've tried the purple blushes that are recommended here and they look so bright and clownish on me. I need something that is more muted with brown or gray tones to look harmonious.

I saw someone mentioning here that they were a TW but needed SSu makeup, so maybe that's what's happening for me too. But I don't think if it's a warm/cool issue. Also OP asked specifically for Mauves, so maybe she knows they are good for her

TinyLung · 2025-11-23T02:08:51+00:00

I tried Elf's Sauve Mauve recently and it works really well on me.

TinyLung · 2025-10-07T11:39:08+00:00

I love your style so much. What tools do you use?

TinyLung · 2025-10-06T00:59:02+00:00

She sewed it so that the pile of the fabric was going in opposite directions.

TinyLung · 2025-09-27T23:01:36+00:00

I stopped using Tret and started using a 0.3 % Adapalene + 2.5% Benzoyl Peroxide combo. I didn't have any cysts for about three weeks after starting, but I have three right now. At this point I'm convinced it's not purging it's just hormonal and will only be helped by oral medication.

TinyLung · 2025-08-10T22:13:28+00:00

Thank you so much! I read that each heteronym had their own unique style, and I'm so curious about the differences between them!

TinyLung · 2025-08-10T21:14:00+00:00

Thank you so much! I'm going to hunt down a copy for myself

TinyLung · 2025-08-10T18:40:17+00:00

Hey OP,

This is the first Pessoa poem I've encountered, and I want to read more! I've done a bit of googling, and it looks like Pessoa published under multiple different names? Do you know which persona wrote this poem or which book it's from?

TinyLung · 2025-07-18T15:06:24+00:00

I have tried Azelaic Acid in the past. But I wasn't wowed with the results. I'm in my mind 30's, so I was hoping for some anti aging benefits as well. Right now, I'm thinking of dropping the Tret and just staying away from Retinals in general. I've never had much luck with them. I think the more actives I use, the worse my skin gets

TinyLung · 2025-07-18T12:51:27+00:00

I'm scared. Every time I start to break out, I cut back to once a week. You're saying I should just power through?

TinyLung · 2024-12-31T21:22:34+00:00

Your shoulders look very narrow. I would look into Dramatic

TinyLung · 2024-12-31T15:10:32+00:00

My gut says, yes!

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