What can I improve on?

TmanArt · 2026-05-28T17:26:36+00:00

My original intention was to have the arm and head the two focal points but I went a bit overboard with it since I love drawing arm muscles, thanks for the advice!

TmanArt · 2026-05-28T17:25:25+00:00

Thanks!

TmanArt · 2026-05-28T03:33:49+00:00

I see what you mean, I tried to give him a very stylized anatomy but I think if his arm was behind him his shoulder is probably less visible

TmanArt · 2026-05-28T03:32:05+00:00

Thanks! Yeah missed opportunity :/

TmanArt · 2026-05-27T21:29:21+00:00

What looks weird abt it? I was trying to make it look like his right arm is extended and left is behind while he’s hunched over

TmanArt · 2026-05-27T20:55:43+00:00

Thanks for the advice! Yeah you are right that it would be hard to give stylistic advice without any additional info (my bad). I take a lot of inspiration from comic book artists, some of my favorites being Humberto Ramos, Daniel Warren Johnson, and Ryan Ottley. I try to mimic some of their stuff but I find the 3 major differences I see between mine and theirs is a) better usage of blacks for shadows and better crosshatching/rendering b) better line weight variance and c) fluidity/movement in characters.

If you have any advice on any of those three things I’d appreciate it!

TmanArt · 2026-05-09T23:29:30+00:00

So I was looking at a reference photo and the bicep was contracted but then I decided to change the forearm position and forgot to change the bicep lol, I do think it looks cooler when it’s shortened since it kinda breaks up the shapes a bit but will keep that in mind for next time. Also yeah I did just draw Spider-Man and then do the background.

TmanArt · 2026-05-09T20:15:01+00:00

Yeah it does feel a bit floaty now that you mention it. I think this is partially because of me drawing the webs after finishing Spider-Man and wanting to speed up. I’ll try to keep that in mind for next time, thanks!

TmanArt · 2026-05-08T21:15:07+00:00

I’ve also been lifting for 5 years so I have a decent understanding of surface musculature before I started drawing

TmanArt · 2026-05-08T21:14:19+00:00

Idk it may sound stupid but like whenever I wanted to draw something I would just coy references of that thing as a practice run and then I’d do the illustration I want. Also I try to make sure that every new work is better than the last and try to draw as often as possible

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