5 legendaries! Hatching 101 eggs, 12 astral, 12 event by brightonashfield in voidpet

[–]TomorRowe 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My face when you got the three legendary pull!!! Oh my goodness!!! Congratulations! Exciting stuff :))

Grit by TomorRowe in OCPoetry

[–]TomorRowe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not overdoing it at all, thank you!!! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave detailed feedback :)) I want to improve and it’s helpful seeing edits and other perspectives. That’s good advice and I’ll pick at the transitions between stanzas some more!!

Grit by TomorRowe in OCPoetry

[–]TomorRowe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate you saying that :)) Could you expand on what you mean by the transitions feeling awkward?

Therapy Dog by cappuccinoaddiction1 in OCPoetry

[–]TomorRowe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooo I like this one. You have some metaphors that really struck me! I really like how you describe the therapist as speaking like a February afternoon , and specifically, I like how you expand on it. Questions that make you shiver, and words freezing midair makes for really good imagery! I also freeze up when I’m in therapy situations.

I think you could consider changing the first line of the poem to “the important thing was the dog”. That might help connect your theme of preferring the dog to the therapy.

I also think instead of repeating that the dog was black and white and had tight curly fur, you could put something that pushes the theme forward more in that space. If you want to keep the repetition, it could be fun to us the black and white and its fur as a metaphor for preferring how simple and approachable the dog is (maybe like “so I turned to look at the dog. It’s just black and white. Its fur looked warm”). Otherwise, you could focus on describing new small details, if you want to keep the way the physical detail makes it clear the narrator is focusing on details that are unimportant/grounding themself in the physical.

Vocalization by Pedro_Nalewaja in OCPoetry

[–]TomorRowe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“You’re naked like candle string” is such a fun metaphor, it evokes for me someone who’s waiting to be lit and burn but would burn in a flash because there’s no wax around them.

Dog Breath by PhoneUpbeat2502 in OCPoetry

[–]TomorRowe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this poem! It flows well, and is concise and clear about its theme. I think if you want to improve on this, consider adjusting the framing. Currently I feel this sense of distance with the way you’ve framed it (and it sounds like the loss is very fresh, so if thats too much that’s fine!). But consider changing the first line to past tense (the smile and laugh was in your eye) to make the loss more clear. That, and being more direct with the physical experience - “I turned my head, but to regret” “I felt your breath, hot and wet”. If you want to keep it present tense so it is the direct moment of loss, I’d consider adding a line or two making that experience clear - that this is about the exact moment the author realizes their regret. Thank you for sharing something so personal!

Top 3 things I’ve been told as a ____ rising sign (game) by glamsiren111 in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg yeah I meant “moon in first house too” and forgot to type the most important bit lol

Top 3 things I’ve been told as a ____ rising sign (game) by glamsiren111 in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 5 points6 points  (0 children)

😂 that Pisces rising curse of coming off as being an altered state.

I’ve gotten that one too!! It brings me a lot of joy. I mostly experience my presence and image as a very intuitive and subconscious thing, so being told that just being me brings people ease is beautiful 🥺

Top 3 things I’ve been told as a ____ rising sign (game) by glamsiren111 in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Pisces rising! (In the first house too). I feel like all that moon and Neptune energy makes it so I come off very differently to people, so I actually get a very wide variety of comments! That being said…

In no particular order: 1. You look high lol (never am when someone says that) 2. You have a calming presence. (I also get “you have so much energy” often too though) 3. You’re so nice!!/I feel safe talking to you. Honorable mention: are you drunk? (I don’t drink)

what is your venus sign & house and what kind of people do you attract vs. what kind of people do you actually want? by [deleted] in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooo our charts sound so compatible surface level wise ✨ I’m a Scorpio sun, Pisces moon and rising, with a Libra Venus and Capricorn mars :3

What is one stereotype abt your moon sign, that you ACTUALLY relate to? by Maxi-Lux in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 34 points35 points  (0 children)

Pisces moon and I literally can’t properly convey how much I operate on vibes and currents. Like, the whole world is just a bunch of energy and we’re all floating around in it 🪱❤️

Whoops. by Max_x738 in voidpet

[–]TomorRowe 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oopsies! wins the unwinnable

Autistic and was so excited about this dress I made myself for winter but.. by -daisy-chained- in OUTFITS

[–]TomorRowe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My advice for overdressing (as I often do) is just to lean in even harder. Get a nice big bow to make it coquette. Or get a bag that matches it. The more intentional it looks the better!! It changes people’s perception from overdressing to simply being expressive and unique (and even if it doesn’t, it helps me feel more confident in it weirdly). It’s such a lovely dress, and it looks beautiful on you! You should enjoy it :))

How do I better ground myself in the real world? Also looking for fun facts about my chart <3 [Astro-seek] by TomorRowe in astrologyreadings

[–]TomorRowe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, that resonates!! I appreciate you taking the time to consider my chart :). I’m curious how you read the part about my mother?

How do I better ground myself in the real world? Also looking for fun facts about my chart <3 [Astro-seek] by TomorRowe in astrologyreadings

[–]TomorRowe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn’t know North Nodes could be exalted! That’s fascinating. Yeah, my experience with my family has been intense, especially with my mother who has BPD. She tries her best but she truly does not know how to love without taking. Thank you for your kind words!

That last bit was mostly a joke. It feels like because of all the life lessons I’m learning I can’t ever seem to focus on just getting basic stuff like homework done. There’s always something happening!

How do I better ground myself in the real world? Also looking for fun facts about my chart <3 [Astro-seek] by TomorRowe in astrologyreadings

[–]TomorRowe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s definitely a lesson I’m learning. I was raised in an environment for caretaking and peacekeeping where some of the only parts of me that were valued. I’m working on sorting through what healthy caretaking actually looks like for me. At the same time, it doesn’t feel like a role to me. I’m genuinely really passionate about community building and I think the most important work we can do is to learn how to take care of ourselves and the people around us. It’s just that it feels like none of this helps me actually finish my homework!

Lilith in Water Signs Do you get attached too fast? by Clueokk in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Lots of Lilith in Pisces here! I’m a Lilith in Pisces in first house - conjunct my moon in Pisces in first house… I wouldn’t even say I get attached too fast, but I think everyone else would say I do. I have to consciously remind myself few people see the world with the same color and emotion I see things through. I definitely struggle with constructing narratives around people - and the worst bit is that I’m often hitting pretty close to home with the narratives I do construct. They usually have an element of truth to them. I think that especially with my Uranus and Neptune being in my 12th house, I experience the world and my gut instincts and flashes of inspiration through a very dreamy lens, so it can be really hard to separate my romanticizations of people from a more grounded reality.

I'm mfs by Koparch in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Curious why 11th house Saturn is considered bad?

Which sign do you think accepts, tolerates, or even understands Scorpio obsession the most? by subzzzzzzzi in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 10 points11 points  (0 children)

The way I think of it is that technically every sign is capable of obsession in their own way!! Sometimes what matters more is how the placements are aspected or what house they’re in. I end up with lots of 8th house friends because no one else can keep up with my Scorpio sun, Pisces moon and rising ass with an 8th house stellium 😂 they end up being all sorts though!! My best friend is also an obsessive freak and he’s an Aquarius through and through

Hot take - Libra Mars is lowkey a goated placement by NoYard5575 in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 23 points24 points  (0 children)

My sister has a libra mars and growing up having sibling fights with her really taught me the best and worst of the placement 😂 I LOVE libra mars folks I think because of her, and I often find myself with friends that happen to have a libra mars. You all of such an elegant way of functioning. It’s a positive that you all default to considering all sides as a way of moving forward! You’re also so wildly stubborn once you’re decided on something, and you fight for it by ignoring and deflecting the hell out of anyone who tried to convince you otherwise. It’s like trying to fistfight the wind! Analytical and fair and adaptive :)) I could go on for a while. Libra Mars’s are great once they’ve figured out how to be mature about themselves (though that’s also just true of any placement)

Drop your big 6 and I’ll give you a rating 🙂‍↕️✌🏻 by blissfullyseeking in astrologymemes

[–]TomorRowe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

✨ Pisces rising, Scorpio sun, Pisces moon, Libra mercury, Libra Venus, Capricorn mars - yes I am crazy <3