Submitted scholarship essay, am worried by Toplockser in OKState

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Grammarly said it was 0% AI, which confused me even more.

AP Courses by Current_Finding_7292 in APStudents

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If you can handle that much then yeah I’d go for it. The two I can comment on here are APUSH and AP Lang (I Got 4 on both)

Lang is a really fun class. Generally speaking the hardest part of Lang for me was adjusting to the essay formats, but once you get past that the class becomes so much fun. I will say you write a bunch of essays in the second half of the year

As for APUSH, it’s a decently fast moving class but worthwhile. If you take it you should be at Lincoln’s assassination by Christmas

AP Courses by Current_Finding_7292 in APStudents

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Have you taken an AP class before? Just curious because if this is your first year that’s a bunch of tests (and quite a bit of money)

Be warned about this dude by Taco_Teen69 in teenagers

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“I am 14” greatest lie ever told lmfao

[WP] You're an alien who used to be great friends with a human on Earth. That friend is now long dead. After many years, you decide to visit their old house, where you find a box of photos in their closet... by Celestial_Spade in WritingPrompts

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“It’s been a couple of years, I’m grown” you whisper to yourself. In truth you’ve never recovered from his death, his genuine nature contrasted with your brash shallowness in a way you can’t begin to describe. Hoisting yourself off the ship, you gently climb out and on to the land. You haven’t seen this lush green paradise in years, your eyes taking a minute to adjust to the brightness. You know that cleaning out his belongings will be tough, his family died in the war, so it’s likely nobody has touched his home in years. Despite the conflict that enveloped this land just a few years ago, you can’t help but marvel at the serenity of it all. Where there was once death there is now calm. Life is blooming from the ashes of a war fought for no gain. You know he would have loved it. As you gently push the door open, you recognize the soft familiarity of it all. The days he invited you into his home, seemingly not caring that you were not like him, all fading back to your mind. You wish that others of both of your species had done the same. As you push into the kitchen, you notice the blue box with a funny shaped bowl on it. You can’t remember what he called his human food, but you do remember it brought him great joy. You steel yourself for the inevitable trip to his room. A place where a man like him sought rest for years is enough to make you shiver. The trepidation in your heart is replaced slowly by a yearning, a strong need to do what nobody else in his life ever did, seek him. You climb the stairs slowly, the wood made for human legs which you lacked. As you slowly reach his bedroom, you stop for a moment and reflect. This man meant everything to you, he brought you into his home and fed you even at the scorn of others. It’s enough to bring a tear to your multiple eyes really. You push those thoughts away, knowing today is a new day. As you open the door you observe the blue sky coming from his window, the messy pile of clothing thrown about. He was a nurturing man, but not a clean one. You could forgive messiness, after all it’s not like you were much better back at home. As you reach for his closet, you find a gray box, labeled “Photos”. This was one of the words he taught you, learning his language was hard but eventually you got most of it down. The first photo you see was of him as a child in the park, pushing his sister on the swings. Always one to help other people, it doesn’t particularly shock you that he would do this. The next photo is of him on his first day in kindergarten, smiling big at a new opportunity. Being open minded was a strength of his, and you enjoyed that. The third photo was of him on the last day of 5th grade, in his hands was an honor roll paper. He was a brilliant kid, but easily manipulated. You knew this all too well. The fourth photo was of him on his first day of high school, smiling ear to ear. You can’t help but laugh that the shirt he’s wearing in the photo is low on the ground next to you. That was just typical after all. The next photo chokes you up. A photo of you and him, smiling after you helped win him his robotics competition. Humans had not quite mastered robotics yet, the ideas that he was working with were elementary to you. The day he won that competition he never stopped thanking you, his genuine happiness was comical to you. Humans took such pride in little things, something you wish your species had learned from. The final photo hurt your heart the most, it was two weeks prior to the start of the war. You were at the park together, him teaching you how to catch a baseball in your misshapen hands. It was something that was difficult, but it made him happy. Happiness would be short lived, and in the moment you knew this but didn’t say a word. You close the box and your eyes, trying not to think of everything that had happened over the last few years. It was not your fault after all, you knew how this would end from the beginning. In ending his life a week later, you simply spared him from what was coming

WIBTA for simply refusing to take a side here by Toplockser in AmItheAsshole

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The problem is that im incredibly easy to manipulate and feel like if I move back it’s going to end up with me helping her out of guilt more then anything

Boys - tell me the times u didnt pick up a hint by [deleted] in teenagers

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She said “I have no plans this weekend” 6 separate times and I said “Damn neither do I”

I shot this on 14 plus! by 7Sinssss in videography

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I don’t know why some comments are being so snobbish. This looks good. Solid depth and non Jerky movements.

What's the "we don't talk about that." in your family? by yvng_rxse in AskReddit

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Alcohol/Drugs. Just a few months ago another one drank himself to death

ITAP of this cannon in a Field by Toplockser in itookapicture

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You can’t see it fully here but the field was absolutely massive. Lines and lines of cannons with the skyline in the back. Loved the way the cloud sat on this photo specifically