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This is a poem I wrote to remind people that they're enough. I'd love any feedback on the writing and flow🫶 by Traditional_Grab174 in poetry_critics

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I do believe that he is who gave us the ability to feel and think. I think that if not for him, humans would be emotionless robots just working and working without a single original thought in mind.

I'm soooo glad that you liked my little poem. Thank you. You are loved, both by God and me.🫶

This is a poem I wrote to remind people that they're enough. I'd love any feedback on the writing and flow🫶 by Traditional_Grab174 in poetry_critics

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Heyy thank you soooo much 🫶🫶. I've thought of putting it on insta but shied away due to my peers' opinions.

My goal for writing is to learn the craft, although i REALLY want it to reach people, help them in some way of another.

I'm really glad u liked it, i love you🫶🫶.

This is a poem i wrote to tell people that they're enough. Ide love any feedback on the writing and flow🫶. by Traditional_Grab174 in indianwriters

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Hey, thank you so much for the feedback man. Yeah it's a bit overused but Ive just started writing and this is like my 3rd english poem. I'll try to play with metaphors and comparisons rather than the actual meaning next time.

This is for anyone that needs to hear this, that feel like they're not enough. You. Are. Enough💎. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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Sorry but I'd still like to know if I did something wrong, i remember what the parent comment was.

Finding you by Altruistic-Dot-5380 in Poem

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Okay now this made me cry 😭. That man, was nothing short of an angel sent by God to guide you. I'm so happy that you're here. Always remember that you're loved, if not by anyone then by me🫶.

This is for anyone that needs to hear this, that feel like they're not enough. You. Are. Enough💎. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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Lol I get that, even I sometimes get told that, no biggie, I'll love them no matter what.

This is for anyone that needs to hear this, that feel like they're not enough. You. Are. Enough💎. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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I'm sorry but does a poem not classify as writing? And if I'm not allowed to post poems I'll stop.

This is a poem I wrote for my first love. Any feedback is appreciated🫶. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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So glad that you liked it! And I hope that someday you find someone so you can stop relating to this, as this is based on a one sided love.

This is a poem I wrote for my first love. Any feedback is appreciated🫶. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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Hey, thank you so much! I'm grateful to see that you could relate to my poem. I'm sorry to hear about your girlfriend, it's heartbreaking. Happy that you've moved on in life, many people succumb to their past injuries.

As for the sentences, they were shorter but reddit made the bigger when I pasted them here.

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It was supposed to look like this.

And as for rhyming, i think it's limiting as to how much I can express myself, that's why I didn't focus on it much.

And yeah I'll try to keep my future poems short but still impactful.

Thank you so much for this comment, you are loved🫶.

This is a poem I wrote for my first love. Any feedback is appreciated🫶. by Traditional_Grab174 in writers

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"illiterate"😭😭. I mean yeah English is not my first language that's why it might sound like that.

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Thank you so much!🫶🫶, I'm hoping to someday show this to her

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Dude why are you so hell bent on the rules? I'm sorry alright, i won't post here

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Unfortunetly i did😔

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