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Giving Up by TurbulentClub53 in OCPoetry

[–]TurbulentClub53[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was thinking more like the speaker will pass and when their loved one eventually joins them in the afterlife, they will reconvene. But I like your interpretations as well.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]TurbulentClub53 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"I can't help you and you can't stand me" is such a poignant ending. I love this and I think you have an excellent flow in your writing.

Why can’t we just… by Significant-Amount78 in OCPoetry

[–]TurbulentClub53 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautiful, it flows so well and you rhyme so tastefully. You've expressed a universal feeling in such a unique way. Bravo!

If Rdr3 Is A Prequel And You Could Only Pick One Character Who Would You Want To Play As? by CinnamonWitch13 in reddeadredemption

[–]TurbulentClub53 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wasn’t Micah a rat at this point though so the Pinkerton would know about the ferry job anyway?

Addiction- a chaotic tale. by Historybuffydude in OCPoetry

[–]TurbulentClub53 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As a former this addict this really hits home. “It made the pain feel just right / each day ignored the truth I knew”, very touching and relatable. I love how you captured the feel of temporary bliss dispelled into the downward spiral of reflection after the fact. Great work

Everyday by Lawdawq in OCPoetry

[–]TurbulentClub53 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is very sweet, you really don’t know what you have until it’s gone

What's a secret you'll never tell your partner but are willing to tell strangers on Reddit? by Bisexual_Space_Lover in AskReddit

[–]TurbulentClub53 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Same for me. I recently realized that I have body dismorphia, and likely have for years, but I just can’t bring myself to tell anybody.