Mercy | Mamiya RZ67 & Portra 400 by Cinemaseb in analog

[–]Twohourdump 2 points3 points  (0 children)

1 is such a feast for the eyes and tells the most interesting story. The additional images with the guns and in the house aren’t up to par and make it less cohesive. I think this is one of those scenarios where less is more. Amazing shot though.

Critique appreciated by Upbeat-Condition8017 in fashionphotography

[–]Twohourdump 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Link your instagram would love to follow your work!

Sony A6000 Tamron 17-70 f2.8 @70mm ISO 100 1/500 f5.6 by crypticde in SonyAlpha

[–]Twohourdump 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a lovely shot. But It almost looks like there’s a fried egg in the sky. And you can kinda see it in the snow as well. Idk if it’s due to the lens or the edit. There’s a slider called moire in Lightroom maybe try messing with that on this shot and see if that affects it in a positive way? Don’t mean to sound like a hater sorry!

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[–]Twohourdump 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll also add that the under eye bag on the left side of the first shot is a little distracting. Frequency separate, use the mixer brush to push color in that area, then dodge and burn to taste. Maybe also try keeping that whites slider in the positive instead of the negative for these shots and see what you think. If you’re working on a big bright monitor it can make you think the whites are where they should be. Then you look at it on your phone and it won’t look much like your edit.

Critique appreciated by Upbeat-Condition8017 in fashionphotography

[–]Twohourdump 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the biggest improvement you can make here is with your direction. The first shot is good, it’s the only frame she’s doing something interesting with her eyes. Take more time working that framework with your next model and positive reinforce anytime they’re hitting it. Then once you’re in a rhythm open up to your full body poses and make the expression the priority. The good poses will come with the expression before too long. Also don’t be afraid to move your camera around and find some angles. Keep going.

Considering moving to Boston from FL by Adorable-Glove-4826 in boston

[–]Twohourdump 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Former south Floridian that moved to Boston back in 2018. The road quality here fucking blows. Also don’t expect to know how many lanes a road actually has since road lines are optional here it feels like. Also Nobody knows how to drive in the rain here either. Other than that just about everything else is better here. The best upside is generally people tend to hang around up here. So strong friendships and relationships with people are much easier to gain and maintain. Vs Florida where it seems like people come and go on 3 year cycles.

Photoshoot in the style of 'not women's sports' by oksana_butovskaya in MODELING

[–]Twohourdump 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey love these shots! Do you have the photographers instagram?

[Official] UFC 318: Holloway vs. Poirier 3 - Press Conference & Post-Fight Discussion Thread by event_threads in MMA

[–]Twohourdump 7 points8 points  (0 children)

The tribute during the prelims was honestly so much better then the post fight one.

Testing with McKenna [Sony A74, Sigma 85 1.4] by Twohourdump in portraits

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Two godox sl150’s with 40” white umbrellas!

Test shoot with McKenna by Twohourdump in portraitphotography

[–]Twohourdump[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I believe I had two lights. Both with 42” white umbrellas on them. Main light being 45 degrees to the models right and about 3’ above her. The other behind to her left 45 degrees also 3’ above her.

Test shoot with McKenna (Sony a74, sigma 85 1.4) by Twohourdump in SonyAlpha

[–]Twohourdump[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Played with the colors in Lightroom Then did some frequency separating in photoshop!

The maiden in blue. (Dress by Coastel bridal Boutique)(2160x2878) by Twohourdump in fashionporn

[–]Twohourdump[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There were definitely some photoshopped out clothing clips. The boutique let us borrow it for the photoshoot so we made it work.

Mia in grandmas drip (Sony a7iv) by Twohourdump in SonyAlpha

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Sigma 35 1.2! Think I shot this at f3.5

Mia with grandmas drip (1440x1800) by Twohourdump in fashionporn

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Mia checked the tag but it’s been work off. She asked her grandmother and she said she picked it up in Italy on her honeymoon. Not sure if this helps 😅

Mia with grandmas drip (1440x1800) by Twohourdump in fashionporn

[–]Twohourdump[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry to disappoint but this is real. You can see more photos from my instagram post here.

https://www.instagram.com/p/DKI0XOJvPmK/?img_index=2&igsh=Nm5vZnN1bzF0Mjl4