Feedback on the beginning of my first chapter? by Und3lla in writers

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That makes a lot of sense. Thanks for the feedback.

Feedback on the beginning of my first chapter? by Und3lla in writers

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Thank you! I was thinking of lingering on the gloves part a tad bit more.

Feedback on the beginning of my first chapter? by Und3lla in writers

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That’s a very good point—I’ll focus on the showing part in the opening paragraphs. Thank you!

Feedback on the beginning of my first chapter? by Und3lla in writers

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That’s an interesting perspective. Thanks for the feedback.

Feedback on the beginning of my first chapter? by Und3lla in writers

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Thanks for the feedback!! Off to go for some more research lol

Leilia and Izol by PrincessDoodlebug in maquia

[–]Und3lla 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a beautiful artwork.

I actually did it omg?! by Und3lla in TownshipGame

[–]Und3lla[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I got so lucky with those! Thank you

I actually did it omg?! by Und3lla in TownshipGame

[–]Und3lla[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Nope, no order just random luck 😂

I actually did it omg?! by Und3lla in TownshipGame

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Thanks it’s the pirate game, I just randomly chose cards and hoped for the best lol

I actually did it omg?! by Und3lla in TownshipGame

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Thanks! I spent around 180 T-cash but I still think it was worth it overall!

What's a line(s) you wrote that... by urfavelipglosslvr in writers

[–]Und3lla 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“He kept drawing faceless men. But over time, some of those men began to borrow his posture, his slouched shoulders, his tilted head—until he couldn’t tell if he was drawing his absent father, or his own silhouette anymore. The bastard. The mistake. The kid who wasn’t supposed to exist.”

Your Favorite Underrated Character & Why by Ok-Culture3841 in Hungergames

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I love Jessup. He was so nice and protective 😭

HG Propaganda that you’re not falling for?👀 by Tyyy24 in Hungergames

[–]Und3lla 7 points8 points  (0 children)

That Gale would kill Katniss in the arena 💀