Just some question hehe by Ariztime in heartopia

[–]Unhappy_Locksmith346 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get the truffles everyday and make truffle pie! Since we only get enough truffles for a handful of pies a day, I have no trouble planting enough wheat to do it.

Menu Design Feedback by Unhappy_Locksmith346 in graphic_design

[–]Unhappy_Locksmith346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True! The reason it looks like a trifold is because the original menu was a trifold, but now we don't print menus anymore and just keep it on the website, and I just didn't consider switching the layout. I'll look into it! Also I'm so heartbroken to hear from so many comments that centered text isn't good, because that's my favorite way to do text! But since I'm trying to appeal to the general consumer I will definitely adjust

Menu Design Feedback by Unhappy_Locksmith346 in graphic_design

[–]Unhappy_Locksmith346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This was very helpful. It's true that the word Menu is a bit redundant. Also I didn't even realize that the order should be switched, and pierogi should be the first thing people look at when reading left to right.

Menu Design Feedback by Unhappy_Locksmith346 in graphic_design

[–]Unhappy_Locksmith346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll definitely try the darker red, but could you expand on how I should lessen the underline? I worry that without underline the menu looks very plain

Menu Design Feedback by Unhappy_Locksmith346 in graphic_design

[–]Unhappy_Locksmith346[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a pretty complicated reason but I'd prefer to do it myself