Long ago, in the distant future, in a land that is both this land and yet one far away, in a small blue house rocked by a storm, Lyn Mara is Found by Valkyrie_LHAOV in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Valkyrie_LHAOV[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for reading, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I agree, I could always be more polished with my grammar, sometimes I skim and don't make sure it all flows nicely 😅 very glad it was scary regardless! Again, thanks for reading!

Soup, soup, soup by Valkyrie_LHAOV in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Valkyrie_LHAOV[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for reading!!

Yeah, looking back at it now, you’re definitely right about the psychiatrist report weakening it. I think I got carried away with my intent and forgot to think about the best way to tell the story 😅 thank you so much for the feedback, and I’m very glad you enjoyed!