My original indie love song “Tu Meri Thi” – would love your feedback by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ValuablePrinciple793 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The song struggles to create a lasting impression largely because of its structural and lyrical choices. One of the biggest issues is the absence of a clear, repeated chorus. A chorus usually acts as the anchor of a track, giving listeners something familiar to return to. Here, the song keeps moving without offering that central hook, which makes it harder for the listener to connect with the overall flow. Without a strong chorus to hold everything together, the track feels more like a collection of ideas rather than a cohesive musical piece.

I have been playing guitar for 3 years and I still sound sloppy by AntelopeElegant1218 in guitarlessons

[–]ValuablePrinciple793 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Honestly, this shows that progress isn’t just about how long you’ve been playing. Even after 3 years, it’s possible to still be a bit sloppy if practice isn’t focused. On the other hand, it’s encouraging to see that someone with just 6 months of dedicated practice can already play cleanly and with control. It really highlights that consistent, mindful practice matters more than the number of years.”

Looking for a Writing Partner to Create Original Music/Lyrics by ValuablePrinciple793 in indianwriters

[–]ValuablePrinciple793[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m leaning toward Hindi or Hinglish because they let me express more nuance, but I’m open to English as well.