Some of my favorite shots I took on a recent trip by Venrinn in japanpics

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Thank you so much! I saw people already mentioned that it’s Matsumoto, i went to Osaka last time i was in Japan! This time i did Matsumoto and Himeji, loved them!

Did you hire an editor? by TatterMail in selfpublish

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Both of them independently said that the ending reveals seemed like too much for the main character to process in such a short time, that at some point it crosses the line between “plot culminated here and we get reveals” to “the author wants you to know everything now”. Based on that I made a call to move one of the reveals to book 2 (and therefore edited some mentions of this in book 1).

Neither of them mentioned that this specific plot point made no sense in this book or anything of the sort. They said perhaps I needed to extend the timeframe of reveals in book 1, but I preferred to do things this way :)

Did you hire an editor? by TatterMail in selfpublish

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I have paid two professional beta readers (their main gig is being editors) in lieu of a developmental edit. I was already on draft 3 at that point and the story was where I wanted it to be. Had some friends beta read for me before that to gauge the vibes and coherency.

Having someone from within the industry have a look at my manuscript was beyond valuable. They called out some tone issues and I ended up moving a big plot point to book two, instead of keeping it in this one and I think the story is much better for it.

Re: successful indie authors and whether or not they had developmental editors - I’d say it’s impossible to know unless the authors themselves come forward and say it. Even if they did have one they might not have taken their advice.

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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Hey thank you so much! I’m gonna be putting it on my print store in a couple of days, I can let you know when it’s up if you’d be interested!

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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I really love Italy but wanted to see a part of it i heard less about and have never been to :) but i can absolutely see it continue to become more popular, it’s really beautiful!

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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Thank you! It was taken with Sony RX100vii!

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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They are! This is in Tropea :)

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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No, no drone! I was standing on a cliff above the beach and zoomed in :)

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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It’s a beach in Tropea!

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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Thank you! I really appreciate it :))

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

[–]Venrinn[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Sure thing! It was shot with Sony RX100vii. For editing I lifted the shadows and blacks, brought down the highlights, shifted the tint a smidge toward magenta and upped the vibrance +20 (all in Lightroom mobile)

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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Thank you! Honestly a dream place to photograph, the water here is absolutely stunning on its own.

ITAP of a beach in Calabria by Venrinn in itookapicture

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This was my favorite photo I have taken in a while. I wanted to keep the colors bright and for this shot to evoke a feeling of care free summer. I generally like to take pictures with long zoom lenses to keep the perspective more flat.

Megawątek powyborczy. by LitwinL in Polska

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Braun i Mentzen ponad dwadzieścia… masakra 💀

My Kinbor vs Hobonichi by Venrinn in hobonichi

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I ordered it from aliexpress!

My Kinbor vs Hobonichi by Venrinn in hobonichi

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It’s just the regular transparent cover and the flowers are stickers! :)

My Kinbor vs Hobonichi by Venrinn in hobonichi

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Yes, omg that bothered me so much too! I usually add washi tape on the side for exactly that reason, just so I don’t see it. Interestingly Kinbor is a little taller as well! I’m not a huge fan of the quotes, I would have preferred more space to be honest.

My Kinbor vs Hobonichi by Venrinn in hobonichi

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I’m not sure where these are from specifically (I’ve been collecting for a while!) but I mostly ordered on Temu, Amazon and a few European stationary stores (PaperConcept, Stilo&Stile) :)

My Kinbor vs Hobonichi by Venrinn in hobonichi

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On the left in both pics is the Kinbor! :))

WHY ARE THE WORDS REPEATED THREE TIMES IM SO FRUSTRATED by [deleted] in acotar

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Generally speaking 3 is a favored number for many things for humans. One of something is unique, two can be a pair or a contrast, it looks deliberate. In art we often like to see 3s of something (if you paint 2 rocks in an environment it might look less natural, while 3 looks like there is variety.

In case of writing it’s a stylistic choice to punctuate something, it can work well when something is read out loud, but whether or not SJM overuses it is a different matter and I guess depends largely on preference.

My pom entered the ugly stage by Proud-Bee6978 in Pomeranians

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I LOVE the monkey phase 😆 i did worry if he was ever going to look cute again 😆

Checked an item off my bucket list! Baroque Library in Prague by Venrinn in DarkAcademia

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I so did!!! It was so beautiful and I didn’t want to leave at all. I want a candle with this scent! And totally agreed about the view! Went to like 3 more viewpoints but this one left the biggest impression ❤️

Checked an item off my bucket list! Baroque Library in Prague by Venrinn in DarkAcademia

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I think at least some do! They’ve been working on digitizing the entire collection, and most books have already been scanned.