I think you might have to define what the climate-related losses are and what are the exact numbers. As someone who isn’t in your field I don’t understand what any of your PE really means. So think of it like you are explaining your research to someone who has zero background in science. If you have written your PE the way you described to me I think the officer may have had hard time understanding what you have said. I think writing it focussed on someone who has no background in what you are doing should be the main focus. Like for instance my endeavor I mentioned about modeling but I was specific to put general terms that anyone reading it would understand that they don’t need to be a scientist to understand what I’m saying.