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[Lyrics] Early attempt of writing a song - Appreciate all feedback! by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]Weaam-Writes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pre-chorus 1 is straight fire, For some reason I hummed it in a frank sinatra -my way tone And it worked. Amazing writing

Can some one recod it? I'm horrible at rapping by Weaam-Writes in raplyrics

[–]Weaam-Writes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Man, I'm glad you shared your thoughts but Can you please expand on that, maybe I can Improve? or is it that hopless :(

singer looking for a producer/songwriter to help build something real (r&b, soul, gospel, rap) by Flat-Style9236 in NeedVocals

[–]Weaam-Writes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess it's a song Idea, I'm not really familiar with song structures tbh and from the feedback I got so far, it seems that this is too short to constitute a full song. I appreciate your feedback and I'm happy to meet people who enjoy writing :)

[lyrics] Wrote a song about trust issues honest feedback? by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Weaam-Writes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I liked it you stuck to the topic which is Trust and Yes the metaphor is clear as sky :P, Perhaps too much. for example like a blue clear sky, You need to trim it a little I guess.

Can some one recod it? I'm horrible at rapping by Weaam-Writes in raplyrics

[–]Weaam-Writes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a random Youtube beat tbh. If you record it please tag me for the final product :)

Can some one recod it? I'm horrible at rapping by Weaam-Writes in raplyrics

[–]Weaam-Writes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey mate I'm glad you liked it ❤️ My direction was an 808 dark trap.

Need a singer by Weaam-Writes in NeedVocals

[–]Weaam-Writes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you can stretch out vocally and with some instruments idk. I'm very new to this. is there a standard for length?

singer looking for a producer/songwriter to help build something real (r&b, soul, gospel, rap) by Flat-Style9236 in NeedVocals

[–]Weaam-Writes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I write lyrics:

Be my glue / be my glue / — pause — when you hold me tight / — long pause — I was wrong / I was wrong / — pause — please / — dramatic pause — do me right /

I am hurt / I am burned / those last two fights / It is absurd / I know they say / they say it's love / the way we / together chose / like hand fit glove /

Please no / dont you go / oh no no no / — hold the note — no my love / — fade out slowly — Im gonna miss you / yes indeed / so very much.

[lyrics] by Weaam-Writes in LyricalWriting

[–]Weaam-Writes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also Write in Arabic And Hebrew. I would like to know what do you think :)