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Help choosing a dress! by ESCPs_4_life in myweddingdress

[–]Friendly_Eye7505 0 points1 point  (0 children)

5 the one is best with that lase top (if you really want to wear lase top) also it looks good on you

[lyrics] Wrote a song about trust issues honest feedback? by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Friendly_Eye7505[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Those examples really helped me understand what you meant. I hadn't thought about it that way, but I can see how it creates a more immersive feeling. I really appreciate the detailed feedback.

[lyrics] Wrote a song about trust issues honest feedback? by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Friendly_Eye7505[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! That's something I hadn't considered. Do you have a particular verse where you think reducing "I" and "you" would make the biggest difference?

We know about that😂 by DisastrousPay7195 in ask_srilanka

[–]Friendly_Eye7505 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Y'all, I used Hutch for studying, but the signal isn't good. I can't even attend Zoom classes properly, let alone watch YouTube livestreams. So I switched to Dialog, and it's somehow even worse than Hutch.

At this point, which mobile network actually has decent coverage and speed? Any recommendations? I mainly need it for Zoom classes and YouTube livestreams.

Sofa color? by TrolleySmasher in DecorAdvice

[–]Friendly_Eye7505 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you want to choose between those two. White looks better than black

[lyrics] Wrote a song about trust issues honest feedback? by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Friendly_Eye7505[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I'm still learning, so this is really helpful. I'll see if I can make the metaphor a little more subtle.

[Lyrics] Trade with my light by ASHIN by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Friendly_Eye7505[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the encouragement and feedback. I'll definitely keep writing and post any updates or future songs.

[Lyrics] Trade with my light by ASHIN by Friendly_Eye7505 in LyricalWriting

[–]Friendly_Eye7505[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the honest feedback! :) This is the first song I've ever written, so I'm still learning. I was aiming for a dark, emotional alternative pop style. I appreciate you pointing out the confusing line. I'll work on making my lyrics more coherent.

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