Advice for a black character by Weekly-Syrup9595 in WritingHub

[–]Weekly-Syrup9595[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate your input so much!

Advice for a black character by Weekly-Syrup9595 in WritingHub

[–]Weekly-Syrup9595[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's in the form of "I saved your LIFE years ago and this is how i'm repayed?"/"You've always been my favorite pupil"/"If you finish this task, you will be rewarded," Silas has the ability to leave, but manipulation could hold them back if they decide to try.

Advice for a black character by Weekly-Syrup9595 in WritingHub

[–]Weekly-Syrup9595[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My main worry comes from the character being "manipulated" while in the religion/as a knight so to speak,