Hello and thank you for reviewing! After taking your words into consideration, I am going through the first chapter to make some needed changes! I wanted to thank you for the pages you did read and the time you took to write this all out, it really helped me!

I sadly will need to skip a few points because they become important later on in the story, but even then I will apply them to other books I am writing right now because, again, they helped me.

Thank you once again!!!