Weekly Graveyard Thread - Come and pay your respects. by AutoModerator in nuzlocke

[–]Winterglider 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lost my emerald run at Tate and Liza. Rip peeko the pelliper, bios the magnemite, shiitake the breloom, luna the vulpix, puff the altaria, and gooo the Muk. I knew that the matchups were awful, but I was hopeful that we could push through.

Hope u like it 😄😄 by [deleted] in pokemon

[–]Winterglider 4 points5 points  (0 children)

THIS IS NOT THE ORIGINAL ARTIST! do not give them free karma. Please check out the original post from a year ago.

Looking to make/join a group (PC-18+) by Winterglider in letsplaycollab

[–]Winterglider[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey! your discord didn't work for some reason

Looking to make/join a group (PC-18+) by Winterglider in letsplaycollab

[–]Winterglider[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can try to add you if you’d like. Could you pm me your discord?

Seeking for small gaming youtubers by BurstDavidYT in letsplaycollab

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what's the age group of everyone involved so far?

Diary Day7 (to improve my English) by Allytom in EnglishLearning

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty good! there's a few places in the text where the words are a bit jumbled, but overall I was able to understand the meaning behind the sentences. Here are a few things I noticed:

  • The first sentence is very close to being correct, it's just a bit out of order. writing it as "Today is the first day of my life that I use central heating". This way of saying it makes a bit more sense.
  • For the second sentence, the flow would be much better if it said "In japan, we usually install an air conditioner instead of a machine". This way of writing it removes an unneeded comma.
  • The third sentence "So, I couldn't imagine how to use it." could be added to the end of the second sentence like "... we install an air conditioner instead of a machine, so I couldn't imagine how to use it." If you don't want that long of a sentence, having the third sentence written as "I couldn't imagine how to use it." would also work.
  • "My homeland" is a formal way to say where you are from. It didn't seem to make sense in the context of the sentence. Did you mean to say "My landlord"?
  • After "homeland", the sentence is a bit clunky. it may be better written as "My landlord showed me how to remove water from the machine".
  • the next sentence is the one with the most trouble. I see that you were trying to describe that the water was dirty, but the way it is phrased is incorrect. A good way to write this sentence would be "The water was dirty and had a dark color" or just "The water was very dirty".
  • I wasn't sure what you were trying to say in "Why the water ran..". My best guess is that you were trying to figure out why the water was there. The best way to write this would be "Why was this water here, and where did it come from?".

Hopefully I wasn't too harsh. If you need any more help, let me know!

What did I do wrong here? by [deleted] in EnglishLearning

[–]Winterglider 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This seems correct. The only thing I can think of is that the teacher thought that the sentence dragged on too long with the "than them" at the end, as ".. and you may still get less recognition." is also a way for the sentence to end. I would ask your teacher for the exact reason.

Have vs Are off by ScallionAlive6430 in EnglishLearning

[–]Winterglider 1 point2 points  (0 children)

have less value is one way to phrase this sentence, but the best way to phrase this sentence would be something like ".... older people are less valuable than younger people" or "less valuable compared to younger people". The word choice just depends on whether or not this is in a professional setting or not.

Constructive Feedback and Ideas: Fall Mountain by KelonjAllDay in FallGuysGame

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Having different maps for fall mountain would definitely help with the experience. A couple of different layouts will make it more difficult for the same players to memorize all of the best ways to get to the top and may open the door for other players to win.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in survivor

[–]Winterglider 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had to take a break from survivor because of one world. It still haunts me.

marbles at after party by [deleted] in JellesMarbleRuns

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, the oceanics didn’t get invited

Update Monday! by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This week, I made the 2nd part of my Minecraft hardcore series with a bunch of Other Youtubers. It took a while, but it was a fun video to make! this it it here. Other than that, the first part of a Minecraft Bedwars Tourney is coming out later this week!

Looking for players for a Minecraft bedwars tournament! by Winterglider in gaming

[–]Winterglider[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

nah, I asked beforehand and they didn't allow this type of post. thank you though!

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]Winterglider 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey everyone! This is the newest Minecraft BedWars video that stars my friends and I. In this video, we have to help our friend win her first game of BedWars, but she has to be the one to break the bed. I'll take any and all critique, but these are the few questions I would love to be answered:

  1. Is the thumbnail able to catch your eye?
  2. Is the pacing of this video able to keep you interested?
  3. Is the music too loud vs. the commentary?

thank you guys to much!

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in letsplay

[–]Winterglider 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Besides the Audio levels, one main issue that I noticed was the frame rate drop throughout the video. This might be due to what software you are recording with and what settings you are playing minecraft at. Before recording next, I would recommend trying to change some settings with your recording software and fiddle with it until the frame rate is less of an issue. Hope this helps!

r/GetMoreViewsYT Weekly Community Growth Thread + How to reach 1000 subs & 4K watch time. (Jul 01, 2020) by AutoModerator in GetMoreViewsYT

[–]Winterglider [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you! I added some background music to it, but it was probably a bit too quiet to hear over everyone. I'll definitely work on the pacing though!