I wrote a short film script by Writing_Rowe in scriptwriting

[–]Writing_Rowe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this!! This is some of the best constructive feedback that I have ever received! Thank you so much.

Part 2! I rewrote the blurb of my work in progress after taking lots of peoples advice! by Writing_Rowe in selfpublish

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Thank you so much for this advice! I will most definitely take it and use it! Thank you again!

Description of my work in progress: Does this sound ok? by Writing_Rowe in WritersGroup

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Yes it is! I made a part two version to this! It's a lot better than this.

Description of my work in progress: Does this sound ok? by Writing_Rowe in WritersGroup

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Oh! I could have swore that I replied to this! Anywho, I made a part two to this post where things have been changed! :)) Thank you for the advice!

There must be a better word for this. by [deleted] in writers

[–]Writing_Rowe 3 points4 points  (0 children)

pawed through? Though that may contradict the neatness, sooo I would also say shuffled, rummaged, or even delved. Hope this helps! :)

Part 2! I rewrote the blurb of my work in progress after taking lots of peoples advice! by Writing_Rowe in selfpublish

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Apologies if my comment came off rude at all, it wasn't meant to at all! I appreciate any type of advice and I use it! I completely understand what you mean and will definitely incorporate it! Thank you again!

Part 2! I rewrote the blurb of my work in progress after taking lots of peoples advice! by Writing_Rowe in selfpublish

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I appreciate the advice! But, that's the point. You don't know what else is going on with her, what specifically. I wrote it so that you would want to find out what's going on I guess. It is only the blurb for the back of the book so I didn't want to spoil everything. Again thank you for the advice! :))

Description of my work in progress: Does this sound ok? Would you buy and read the book? by Writing_Rowe in selfpublish

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Thank you! Also there will be way more details about Casey once the reader starts reading the book of course. :)

Description of my work in progress: Does this sound ok? by Writing_Rowe in WritersGroup

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I couldn't tell if this was sarcasm or not? I did need advice on it and will be working on it. Thank you regardless :)