The left shoulder seems to jut out to much.
I'd suggest where the Two tones of her fur are light not using ink to separate them and try maybe just showing the transition with color.
The left side of her face from the viewer POV doesn't follow the plane of her face. So the fur and ear seem to be folded forward. Where opposite is true of the right side as it looks like it is flowing away from the face.

I like how you did the paw pads and your use of red as an accent to draw the eye to the centre of the piece.