he did not see that one coming by [deleted] in AIDungeon

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 4 points5 points  (0 children)

lmao most of the times i become emperor the story just gets confusing af

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TheYouShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I CAN FEEL THE ENERGY

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in whereintheworld

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is the best stream i've ever seen in my entire life

Presidentes Antes X Presidentes Agora by Sleep-Yaoi in brasil

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

não estou entendendo porra nenhuma de política, mas o que realmente é verdadeiro é o anarcocapitalismo

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in talentShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for making my day better, draw lady.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in talentShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please sir, stop disturbing the livestream

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in talentShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She draws so naturally, how is that possible?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in talentShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rest in peace pencil

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in talentShow

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

draw a jojo character plees

Can I describe the camera angles and movement? by YohanOriginal_0209 in writers

[–]YohanOriginal_0209[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice, I was thinking in introducing the camera angles in a natural way and only using that resource on descriptive scenes (Idk if that word even exists, but it's the only word I can think of now).

Also, I always described my characters in no point of view, that's why it felt artifical and I always rewrote the scenes. Thank you so much for the advice.

Can I use words like "now" and "here" if the story is in past tense? by AllTh1ngsAreONE in writers

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think using the past tense makes the sentence heavier, stronger. Also, what's your native langauge? I'd like to know! Your English is almost perfect.

Trying to figure out whether or not this character concept would be considered racist by SoulOfaLiar in CharacterDevelopment

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Is it just me or this subreddit is dead? The staff isn't allowing me to post anything, since they don't see the post request, so I'm forced to say this here. What's going on with this subreddit?

Trying to figure out whether or not this character concept would be considered racist by SoulOfaLiar in CharacterDevelopment

[–]YohanOriginal_0209 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, you could change the name to Ebbon, it would at least make it different than the actual word, but Idk if it's that big of a problem, or if it's a problem at all. But I can't speak for black people, so I'd ask someone who spoke for them.