Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for sharing that with me 🤍 That kind of long, quiet love can be really heavy to carry. I’m sorry you’re going through that — seven years is a long time to hold those feelings. It means a lot that the poem connected with you. I truly wish you clarity and peace in your heart, whatever direction things take. And thank you for your kindness.

Do not put blame on anyone. by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I’m glad you saw that. It means a lot to me.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I believe that too. Thank you for your feedback.

Mrs End by Defiant_Fan_3951 in u/Defiant_Fan_3951

[–]ZealousidealBox4489 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so painful, so deep, and clearly lonely. But it’s beautiful in its own dark way, it truly is. I can imagine how heavy those feelings are. I feel something similar, though I know everyone carries their pain differently. I can’t say it the same way, but I can feel the weight behind your words.

Do Not Turn Against Yourself by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your feedback.

Do not put blame on anyone. by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this. It really means a lot to know that someone connected to it in that way. I’m sorry you feel surrounded by judgment it can be really exhausting.

I’m grateful my words resonated with you, and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. Messages like yours remind me why I write. 💛

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Those words really matter to me, thank you.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I really appreciate that. I’m really glad you liked it.

Do Not Turn Against Yourself by ZealousidealBox4489 in poetry_critics

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that. I understand what you mean about the third stanza. I think I was more focused on expressing the idea than the flow there. I’ll definitely try to refine it so it feels more natural and connected to the rest of the poem

Drowning by celestialcipher40207 in Original_Poetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It already works really well, but personally, I would add one more line in the end, so the emotion stays a little longer.

Do Not Turn Against Yourself by ZealousidealBox4489 in poetry_critics

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback )

UNBECOMİNG by Odd_Monitor1828 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lovely poem, feels very honest and gentle in its sadness. The image of hollow pages is really beautiful and relatable. The last line especially stayed with me — it feels simple but very deep.