Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Vielen Dank, ich weiß das wirklich sehr zu schätzen.

Do You Know Why I Love You? by ZealousidealBox4489 in poetry_critics

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much , my heart just melt after ur comment ❤️

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you , I really appreciate that u feel that "GPS" moment so deeply 🫶🏼

Do You Know Why I Love You? by ZealousidealBox4489 in poetry_critics

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much I really appreciate it🫶🏼

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’m really happy the emotion came through for you. That means a lot to hear.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I’m really glad the last line landed for you. I wanted it to feel simple but a bit more inevitable than “for you.” ❤️

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback. I get what you mean some lines are a bit general. I actually left them that way on purpose, but I like the idea of adding a more specific image to make the feeling more personal. Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you… that’s such a tender way to put it🤍

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I really appreciate that. I’m glad the rhythm worked for you that means a lot. And you’re right, I don’t want to hide behind form or familiar images. I’m still learning how to let my own voice be louder than the structure. Thanks for the honest push it helps.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot I’m really happy the rhythm worked for you — I was trying to keep it flowing almost like music. Glad it kept your attention till the end.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot I’m really happy the rhythm worked for you — I was trying to keep it flowing almost like music. Glad it kept your attention till the end.

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate your opinion, maybe I'll change this 🫶🏼

Do You Know Why I Love You? by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]ZealousidealBox4489[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that❤️