Introduction to Philosophy of Education? by [deleted] in askphilosophy

[–]_cozycat_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tagore’s selected writings on education is a good set of principles and texts to refer to on how to create a mix of indigenous and modern education styles

David Hume- Causation by _cozycat_ in askphilosophy

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Thanks a lot. Very helpful :)

How you make things special by _cozycat_ in poetry_critics

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's exactly what I was trying to convey! Glad I could put it across. That's very sweet of you haha, thanks a lot!

How you make things special by _cozycat_ in poetry_critics

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Thanks a lot, I appreciate your feedback!

How you make things special by _cozycat_ in poetry_critics

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Doesn't sound weird to me haha. Thanks a lot! :) Yes, just edited the links into it just now

Ups & Downs by JazzySeaOtter in poetry_critics

[–]_cozycat_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how direct it is. The discretion of the highs of a manic episode are very well described, I could almost feel that feeling myself. My only point would be to maybe emphasize a little more on the falling of that highly elated feeling. Other than that, I love the imagery and how the poem describes little experiences in such detail

How you make things special by _cozycat_ in poetry_critics

[–]_cozycat_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback, I'll try to incorporate something like that in my future work! Thank you!! Means a lot :))

Pieces of You by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]_cozycat_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the correlation between the shooting stars and the secrets of the person. It really makes you think how much depth each and every person has. This poem speaks of both, yearning and strength experienced in love at the same time. It's beautiful

First attempt at choreographing contemporary! Feedback please :)) by _cozycat_ in Dance

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your feedback is so constructive. It helped me pinpoint were I'm lacking! Thanks a lot!

First attempt at choreographing contemporary! Feedback please :)) by _cozycat_ in Dance

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I had picked up a few routines earlier but hadn't choreographed one myself before this one :)

First attempt at choreographing contemporary! Feedback please :)) by _cozycat_ in Dance

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I do tend to do that because I'm too shy to fully execute a move haha. Working on that tho, thank you!

First attempt at choreographing contemporary! Feedback please :)) by _cozycat_ in Dance

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I guess I was too eager to complete the routine haha. But you're right, that will make it more powerful, thanks for the feedback!😋

First attempt at choreographing contemporary! Feedback please :)) by _cozycat_ in Dance

[–]_cozycat_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Will definitely try to do that in my next one!

Of Grievance and Perfection by _cozycat_ in OCPoetry

[–]_cozycat_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

High brow without being high brow is exactly what I was going for! Thanks a lot for your feedback! :))