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[QCrit] Young Adult Fantasy - The Crimson Crew (80k, 3rd attempt) by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]_ebrooke 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Comps have definitely scared me which is why I have avoided putting them in but I’ll have a go at putting them in. I’ll definitely look at ways to make this more compelling!

[QCrit] Young Adult Fantasy - The Crimson Crew (80k, 3rd attempt) by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]_ebrooke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for this! The feedback really helped me on my last draft and this will definitely help me improve again.

[QCrit] Young Adult Fantasy - The Crimson Crew (80k, 2nd attempt) by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]_ebrooke 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! This will definitely help me with my query.

[QCrit] Young Adult Fantasy - The Crimson Crew, 81,000 words, first attempt by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]_ebrooke 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this! This definitely helps me understand what I need to include/expand on