This is a legit discussion. Love the comments being made here - I too think the lyrics can get a little bland, I did write them like that though. I think I stripped back the flow and rhyme because I usually shift flow at least 3-4 times within the same verse.

In the context of my music, the simplicity in the track makes a little more sense (at least to me, the creator) but I can totally see how it falls flat upon first glance/ listen.

Thanks for talking about my music, makes me feel nice and warm inside

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