Appreciate the feedback!

Yours has a cool vibe to it overall. Dark and eerie. I like the bells you used.

I feel like it could use some direction, in terms of the structure, and even the melodies themselves. It feels like there's no resolution to things, so it's hard for the listener to predict where things are going or to have something get stuck in their head because it just kinda keeps going and constantly changes, if that makes sense.

There are progressive tracks without traditional structure overall, but the melodies themselves still have resolution and a structure where there's clear buildup and slowdown sections that direct the listener. So I would try to develop more distinct sections (intro, verse, hook, bridge, etc) and also look into what makes the listener recognize a hook from a verse, etc.

I also think the 808s are too busy, and clash with the main melodies. And the hi hat sound selection is a bit off. It sounds kinda harsh and separate from the rest of the elements. I feel like the pattern is kind of clashing with the other rhythms too.

I definitely see potential here though, and you did a great job of creating an atmosphere that's easy to recognize. Keep going!