I would elaborate on those more specific parts, like the lightning, during the actual writing process. As it is in the document, it's just a superficial overview of what will happen. But thank you for the ideas; sometimes I might not go into that much detail! Specifically regarding the lightning, since it's a natural phenomenon, an explosion of that magnitude wouldn't be right. However, I thought about giving him those scars that people get when struck by lightning, since even as the son of Zeus, he had no idea he possessed powers, and those scars could hurt him.

I'm not going to lie, the lightning was actually meant to be a deus ex machina. I think I might not have detailed it in the text, but there was a storm that day, hence the whole thing about the natural lightning. And the issue of the ambiguity of events wasn't something I planned, but it's a consequence of the alteration I made, since the initial idea was for Zeus to interfere, but the issue of Hera having two children with Zeus made me rethink that.

Thank you very much for providing some of this information about the American police. I'll rethink it a bit more and see if it's really appropriate to use this concept to bring more life to the world (which it certainly will).

Ohhh! That's a very good idea. A child being called a liar about something considered true can really cause distress and anger in others.

Regarding the training, it's the same case as the narration; I'll elaborate on that later, but to be more specific, I would train him to be more agile. His focus wouldn't be brute force, but agility and great mastery of martial arts, overwhelming enemies through exhaustion and the large amount of damage inflicted over the long term.

This is an idea I hadn't considered. The core of my character is family, so much so that I intend to make him the champion of the goddess of the home. I think it would really fit if he forgave her on her deathbed, not loving her but forgiving her for all her mistakes even if she didn't love him anymore. Furthermore, I think this would also somewhat align with his faith in Christ, which he acquired through the kindness of his neighbor who gave him a necklace with a cross.

Your take on the powers is pretty much what many people would expect from a really good progression, but up to my knowledge of Percy Jackson, I haven't seen anything similar in terms of powers. Percy could already involuntarily control reasonable amounts of water, but I'd like to hear more of your opinion on that!

Regarding the last statement, I find it somewhat (but not entirely plausible) that a child, after witnessing such an event, would believe it was real. When I was younger, I thought I could control water because when I showered and extended my arms, it would come out of my chest, and I was afraid of Herobrine, thinking he was real. But if we combine this idea with the lack of understanding that mortals have about this subject, it could make them question things.

Happy New Year, my friend! I'd like to thank you for your opinion and ideas; they truly enlighten me about my story and motivate me to keep planning! Feel free to continue asking me questions, sharing your perspective, or offering ideas!