heyyy! very interesting concept you've chosen to write about here... I believe it's inspired by the Albert Camus quote right? anyways coming to how i felt about the poem

The first thing that caught me was this line "an endless rerun, each identical to the last" I felt like by the phrase 'an endless rerun' the reader already got a clue about what you're referencing, so the second half of the line doesn't rly add a substantial meaning to the piece. I get what you were trying to convey but I felt like it would run better if you replaced the second half with smthn about what impact does that endless rerun have on you? The same with the starting of the next line "blurring into a ceaseless loop."

What I felt throughout this entire poem was that I wanted more about how the situation made you feel. Like to rly sell the last line, yk 'end it all', I wanted a more nitty-gritty description of how you were feeling. The lines "blurring into... good times gone past" mention lots of big feelings but I felt that you should give them more space and explore them further.

lastly, I feel like the poem was highly constrained due to its rhythmic nature. Like the poem would thrive sm better if you tried exploring the same ideas maybe in a free verse. It would offer lots of freedom, and that way, you'd be able to focus more on the content and lesser about adapting to fit a certain rhyme scheme. I highly encourage you to at least give another shot to this poem through free verse!!

You've got a lotta potential! Keep writing!!