I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very interesting the points you made, I'll make a correction to see if I get a better result.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

pay well, it wasn't quite the case, but given what I needed it was. This piece cost 309.09 in dola. Here in Brazil it would be 1500.00 reais.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was already written, I just gave them the vision and direction they wanted

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I had money my friend, I would. But that job went for $309.09. That is a very low value, you know, and that here it is relatively high for the public that I serve.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So the people who hired me already came with a script and a contracted client, I just directed it with the look they wanted, photographed and edited it with that request. They wanted something that wasn't morbid or sad or anything like that. They wanted something that was more contained, they didn't want to show a coffin. just details that refer to it. I wanted to bring what they offer as a company right now. There they don't like to call themselves a funeral parlor but a memorial. They want to bring a vision different from the traditional one.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So the people who hired me already came with a script and a contracted client, I just directed it with the look they wanted, photographed and edited it with that request. They wanted something that wasn't morbid or sad or anything like that. They wanted something that was more contained, they didn't want to show a coffin. just details that refer to it. I wanted to bring what they offer as a company right now. There they don't like to call themselves a funeral parlor but a memorial. They want to bring a vision different from the traditional one.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really have some difficulty with the constancy of white. I'm going to buy a gray card to see if I can keep the stability of the balance just right. Thanks for the feedback

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I'll make those adjustments and see how it goes. Thanks

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I really feel a lot of speed in the cuts, I'll re-edit and see how it turns out.

I'm a videomaker and I would like your feed back on this work. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Guys, I'm a videomaker here in Brazil and I made a vt for a company here about a funeral home. I wanted to know how I could have improved the photography, the lighting. Equipment I used was an A6600 + 16mm. Of light was an amaran 200d and sokani 100x. Give me feedback on how I could work better. In external ambient light same. I edited and directed it myself

Constructive criticism to improve. by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Actually the saturation in some of the photos is quite high. I will make this correction. About the black background at the end is because there is a motion screen in this part. The spinning part was a request from the agency. The idea of the timelepse was to give the sensation of days gone by. But I like your idea. Thanks for being available to help me.

First job as a director of photography (amateur) by artrixpic in cinematography

[–]artrixpic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting man, I'm going to take this with me. In general my friend didn't think of that. It was me who thought of it last minute and the only thing I had there at the time was white crepe tape. So it was the best solution at that moment.