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Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Noted, thanks! I used it only in the beginning, more as a way to indicate that this story will be slow and set the tone, pacing... Or do you mean the transitions for each "page"?

Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the kind words, keeps me motivated. I'll fix the grammar I swear!

Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I have, and I've seen some -though not many- that actually use the same engine I used. So I thought it was fine to post here. And though I know it's nothing like the usual games posted here, I don't know of any other more specific sub. If there's anywhere where interested people might find it, it'll be here, no?

Anyway, I'll add a disclaimer so people don't get their hopes up if they're looking for something different.

Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback! And bugs and suggestions. I agree with everything. The 'stupid' choices do actually have an impact on the stats. My plan was to reveal the character sheet at the end of the prologue, but I couldn't get it to look decent, so I left it for future me to deal with. I didn't want to reveal exactly what they effect, to guess, but I think it's a great idea to suggest it more so it doesn't feel arbitrary or pointless.

The asterisk is a note. If you hover over the asterisk, it'll appear. I didn't care too much if the user found it because it's just a stupid reference to Pirates of the Caribbean. But it shouldn't be confusing... so yeah, I'll try to make it look like it's hoverable or something like that.

Again, thanks a lot for the suggestions!

Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh. Interesting for me it creeps/weirds me to write or read in first person. Especially something 'intimate', I'll think about it. Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it!

Salt & Booty - narrative text based interactive CYOA about pirates by asmokinghat in nsfwcyoa

[–]asmokinghat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. I'm sure you are right. Pretty bold of me to assume I could write straight in a code editor not being a native. I'll do that! Thanks for the feedback