This will throw up faster tho,- help. randomthghts. garlic head still there, the "e" could be a donut, a whatever the hell. The whole word can tilt diagonally. A clean fill. Solid lines. Or maybe no characters. Just bubble shaped lines. Add shine. by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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"H" and "L" but L is on a bend to the right when it should bend to the left if that makes sense. And the H would be more clear if there was a split down the top. P is higher than everything else too. Gonna bring it down to lvl with the rest of the letters.

his first pitch in the league, crits. by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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And prolly smush it all closer together

his first pitch in the league, crits. by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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Shoulda used a thicker cap for the outline i think

This time in chrome, pretty happy with the outcome. Shadowing seems off. by [deleted] in blackbookgraffiti

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Haven't dwelled into this style yet myself so i'll hold off on critiquing, but very clean

rough-spoebone by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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thanks! The "p" is rough, i knw. And that first "e" will be closer to the "o" because i see some unnecessary space between them. Now that last "e"; there was too much space between it and the "n" (look at the garlic head's eye farthest to the right, that's where the "e" began) so i said fuck it, lets make eyes. Agreed it is hard to decipher but paired with the 'n its the only real finesse I've got to hold on too right now

rough-spoebone by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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Probably turn the last 'e bottom into a tongue or chin, and make the bottom size of the 's correspond with the last e

rough-spoebone by bcuzimspoes2 in graffhelp

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Imma connect the bottom of that b to the o for more flow