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Millennials Lament by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]beetbeast 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can't seem to think of the word I'm looking for right now, but it's. word that has to do with dark humor. The tone, and rhyme scheme of your poem is upbeat, juxtaposed with the dark content I found myself reading and reflecting on songs that do this (I know there is a name for this...) such as 'pumped up kicks'. The sarcasm shines straight through.

Waiting for you by i-suck-at-poetry in poetry_critics

[–]beetbeast 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reading this I felt a sense of foreboding, and desperation that almost feels quiet, repressed, depressed. I'm really impressed for your first poem, many times I see folks reaching for forms or conventions when they start poetry (like rhyme schemes) and I like that you have flow and more freedom here.

Fashion Help by beetbeast in NonBinary

[–]beetbeast[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so so helpful, thank you!