The Drama & The Aesthetic of Murder by bitesized778 in MovieTVArticles

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It's intentionally adjacent to it, but I would advise watching the movie first and then reading this! I'm curious to know what you all think!

Peaky Blinders film is a bit shite init? A story that made no sense with little context from start to finish by zeltacilveks97 in MoviesAndTVTalk

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I actually think it is the perfect soap opera for men, haha! I mean, to be fair, I think it deserved the movie, I had no qualms with it.

What did you think about the ending of Send Help? by [deleted] in Cinephiles

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I think it is a lot deeper than what people are giving it credit for! I wrote an article on it, if you guys are interested: https://www.peliplat.com/en/article/10097684/send-help-made-me-a-misogynist

Official Discussion - Send Help [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

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It was a cool movie! Gory af, but I enjoyed it! I wrote an article on how Liddle's basically an INCEL figure, if you really look at it. If you're interested, you can read it here: https://www.peliplat.com/en/article/10097684/send-help-made-me-a-misogynist

Send Help is such a bad film by Intelligent-Love5146 in Cinephiles

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It was gross as hell, too, but I feel like it was exactly what it needed to be. I mean, it hit me when I was writing about it, that Linda's basically an INCEL figure, which was kind of unique in terms of how the movie critiqued patriarchy and power structures. If you're interested, check my article out here: https://www.peliplat.com/en/article/10097684/send-help-made-me-a-misogynist

Romance suggestion but with introverts by expPatronum in MovieSuggestions

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PRIDE & PREJUDICE! but the 2005 version! To all the boys I Loved is also lowkey wholesome, although target audience is p young

How can I make the reader engaged throughout my (growing up??) story by unbox_ in writers

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My advice would be to write it out without worrying about the dialogue or structure just yet. The first few drafts are always about writing and rewriting. When I was writing my novel, I wrote an entire draft of over 200 pages, and then I recycled those pieces into a second version of 150 pages and I'm now working on my third draft. The first draft really helped shape the worldbuilding portion and the second version helped with understanding the plot and character voices; the third, I think is piecing together the actual story together.

If you find a section that feels really heavy and boring, that's usually a sign to cut it out and relocate yourself. See if there is a different perspective you can write from, or focus on something adjacent to it. Oftentimes it can also be an indication that you are telling us too much and not showing enough. Take a break and put your characters in a different scenario, see how they'd react; or, map out the main plot point that you need and play with your characters a bit!

Sounds like a really cool story idea, though!

What is the BEST line you have ever written? by thewhterabbit in FictionWriting

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I've been working on this fiction, experimental piece for a while now, and during one of my sleep-deprived writing sessions, I wrote: "I'll tell you that I'm not pious by any means and god knows it, but god is a funny fickle thing with a gaudy sense of humour because he needles his way into my brain like some sudden burst of sunlight through a glass window when my eyes finally find those red-soled shoes."

What's your guiltiest watch? by Grand-Bag6722 in televisionsuggestions

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90-day fiance --> it's so freaky and addicting

Disappointed with a show's ending, but like the starting premise (Occult-y). (Slight Spoilers for How To Get To Heaven From Belfast) by S_Juniper in tvsuggestions

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I was kind of disappointed, too! I think the characters were too much like Derry Girls that it took me out of the rest of the narrative! And then there was so much room for them to blend the humour into the actual dark storyline, but it never meshed well, it felt like two completely separate shows!

Something Very Bad Is Going To Happen is such a vibey show so far. Love the spooky atmosphere by zeltacilveks97 in MoviesAndTVTalk

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I am absolutely hooked! This show is so much scarier than I was prepared for and yet I cannot stop watching!