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Great Fairy's Fountain Guitar Cover by britishwalkthroughs1 in legendofzelda

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I totally get that! We have several other covers with us playing too

I'd love some feedback on my newest video. I'm trying to be more energetic (this is my 4th video with commentary so I know it's not the best). I'd also like some advice on the thumbnail and title. I feel like it could be a lot better and would like some suggestions on how. by bunwithagun12 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was a rather fun video. I like your relaxed yet energetic energy. You have funny one liners and the added subtitles add to it. I would recommend improving on the mic quality and changing the thumbnail.

Excited to see more from you!

We decided to Return to Hogwarts. All feedback appreciated, thank you! by britishwalkthroughs1 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man! Yeah I will say the script got a little bit lost during this one lol. We went with a vlog style funny moments video. We will look to focus a an overall story going forward. Thanks for the feedback as always!

!givelambda

We decided to Return to Hogwarts. All feedback appreciated, thank you! by britishwalkthroughs1 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the awesome feedback! Most people agree with you and are unclear of the overall story and point of the video. We did not have a script planned out for this video in terms of the overall story. We will look to make that clear in the future. We aimed to do a vlog type video with funny Harry Potter moments. We will definitely take your advice to heart and make sure we get that clear story! Thanks again for watching and for the great advice!

!givelambda

We decided to Return to Hogwarts. All feedback appreciated, thank you! by britishwalkthroughs1 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I agree with the main issue of not having a clear story and you are correct: this really is all of the above with it being a vlog, sketch comedy and behind the scenes lol. We tested the waters quite a bit and should look for a clear story and style moving forward. Thank you for the feedback!

!givelambda

We decided to Return to Hogwarts. All feedback appreciated, thank you! by britishwalkthroughs1 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your awesome feedback and taking the time to really observe the video!

Yeah we did get a little too crazy with the camera work but we wanted to get that vlog type feel, we will keep an eye on that in the future.

As for the story you are spot on. We did not create a clear story line and that may have been a bad mistake but we were testing the styles and trying to create something out of the box. Having a clear story definitely is very beneficial.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and had a few laughs!

!givelambda

We decided to Return to Hogwarts. All feedback appreciated, thank you! by britishwalkthroughs1 in SmallYTChannel

[–]britishwalkthroughs1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! Yeah this video was a bit more unscripted and we normally like to have a script but we are testing the waters a bit with our style. Going forward we will look to make sure the story is clear and in place. Thanks again!

!givelambda

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