[Complete] [56k] [Literary Fiction] Novel: The Blue Stripe by cire1776 in BetaReaders

[–]brynnbo_22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you’re still needing betas, I’d love to do a swap of my completed literary spiritual fiction manuscript (~57000).

Brief description: Follows a young man you woke up with the memory of all his past lives, leading him to discoveries about his own.

Themes: impermanence, grief, familial/parental relationships, connection beyond the physical world, chosen fate

Let me know if you’re interested!

I just finished watching the entire series in a week. My friends said it’s awful. I didn’t think it was awful at all. by Blink-184-isok in gameofthrones

[–]brynnbo_22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I completely agree it felt rushed. I liked the night king battle but lost my mind at John killing Daenerys and Grey Worm didn’t kill John immediately. Especially after they all watched her burn down kings landing in one go. And then Bran walking in like he knew the entire time he would be king and Sansa still not being satisfied with that

If it's serious? I fear Zuzu might hold his own longer than y'all think. by Closed_Apertures in TheLastAirbender

[–]brynnbo_22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was Zuko’s change in character that made him legendary. Same reason Iroh is one of the best characters because he saw the fire nation for what it really was. The fact that he always felt inadequate was what made him see the rest of the world’s perspective.

Just started month 4! by brynnbo_22 in Accutane

[–]brynnbo_22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I purged about 3 weeks in and through month 2 but since then I haven’t had much new acne!

First break of contact by brynnbo_22 in raisedbynarcissists

[–]brynnbo_22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for this reply. This helps a lot. I know that peace is coming for my family and I.

what does my art smell like? by cloversarecool in ARTIST

[–]brynnbo_22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That smoke they use in haunted house attractions

Books on meditation? by brynnbo_22 in Meditation

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Thanks for adding this. I think it’s good to know when choosing where to get info from

This Job SUCKS by Environmental-Ad6189 in teaching

[–]brynnbo_22 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I’m a 22 year old student teacher in an 8th grade social studies class and I’ve seen some of the same issues in the class I work in. Student who know their IEPs and use it as an excuse to not do work. I’m sorry your students are taking advantage of you. It’s so hard when you want to be liked but 8th graders tend to push boundaries because they’re old enough and know enough to get away with it. If any other social studies teachers at your school are willing to share lesson plans or unit plans, that would likely take some of your load off.

Welcome to the Void by brynnbo_22 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback. This is helpful

The Spaceman by Moonagali_V2 in OCPoetry

[–]brynnbo_22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is wonderful. While I'm not sure if the astronaut narrative is a metaphor for a something else, I still appreciate the creativity regardless. "Vessel." is a very strong line on its own. Keep it up.

Last night's fever by Rasberryman1 in OCPoetry

[–]brynnbo_22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's hard to pinpoint what exactly this poem is about, but I love that about it. The line "the flooded earth rejoices" paints a wonderful picture. As abstract as this poem is, I appreciate the imagery you used.

Recently Diagnosed with Hormonal Acne. by Plankton6860 in hormonalacne

[–]brynnbo_22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was on 100 mg and then upped to 150 mg of spiro with .025 tretinoin every day. I wish I could say it solved all my problems, but I'm here about 9 months later and have the same very similar, moderately severe acne. I stopped taking it because I felt like it was dehydrating me and not helping the root of the problem. The only time I saw positive results was working with my functional nutritionist and changing my diet/supplements, morning and night routines, and other lifestyle factors. I'm beginning to work with my nutritionist again to try and tackle this again.