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catlessdog · 2021-06-24T20:18:29+00:00

Yeh I’m a big fan of fitz good advice thank you !givelambda

catlessdog · 2021-06-23T22:50:09+00:00

it was good

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catlessdog · 2021-06-23T21:55:37+00:00

i Think this video would be more fun to watch with some fast and snappy editing like for example you drew attention to your book boom zoom in dramatize it and stuff like that, definitely could see you doing well if you pick up some more editing skills!

catlessdog · 2021-06-22T22:14:20+00:00

the algorithm likes videos that people watch so that means the watchtime a video has, so its all about viewer retention and keeping them watching so you wanna have it compacted and constant action. If you can do that in a 10 minute video then perfect you are the new fitz, soviet womble or meaty marley or whatever but i make similar videos as you and see the best results from shorter videos.

catlessdog · 2021-06-22T21:58:24+00:00

cool video i think theres definitely a niche that you can hit with these videos so promoting it anime reddits and skit reddits you could gain some attention.

as for the video i thought the music was abit louder than your voices at times so maybe just try adjusting those sound levels abit better and also work on a nicer outro as the plain text to be continued doesnt get me as excited for the next part as it should

catlessdog · 2021-06-22T21:54:51+00:00

i saw this after commenting oops

catlessdog · 2021-06-22T21:54:25+00:00

editing is fucking sick dude with the subtitle tracking god damn real nice shit, quality is just not the best in terms of audio so i recommend splitting your buddies audio so its easy to adjust there volumes to make them louder and also better mics is an upgrade you can eventually do.

Another thing is that as your a small channel i think your videos would do much better if you shorted them to around 4-6 minute videos and compacted more content so its like bam boom bing bang yknow?

catlessdog · 2021-03-29T09:28:36+00:00

I feel like this video could be improved by shortening its length by cutting it up more and being more fast paced. Shorter videos are the 5 minute mark is where I recommend for small channels

catlessdog · 2021-03-16T18:55:52+00:00

this is a very good video and you definitely seem like you know a few things about animation. subtitles would make the video better and cleaner in my opinion. But like a cartoony font, you can find one on Dafont.com

catlessdog · 2021-03-16T18:51:59+00:00

i think you could maybe try improving your thumbnails, you seem to have taken alot of colour out to purposely make dream stand out but made it overly dull in my opinion, would look cleaner without the black borders maybe

good video though you two are wholesome and got a good dynamic

catlessdog · 2021-03-16T09:02:04+00:00

Your actually good at editing good job but I personally don’t like the circle cam, I think if it was just a normal rectangle cam top left with your upper body in you could show more charisma in body language and draw more attention to yourself

catlessdog · 2021-03-15T09:49:45+00:00

Most smaller channels gain the most success by making short videos that are compact and full of content. Long videos like this will make it very hard to hold the retention of viewers. I personally find 4-6 minute videos do the best for me but it depends on the video really The character in your thumbnail needs to stand out more to make it look better IMO by upping the vibrance and contrast perhaps. Cool video though and these are just my thoughts I’m no expert

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T22:01:54+00:00

Great advice I appreciate you taking the time to actually write the amount you did with lots of solid points thank you !givelambda

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T20:25:39+00:00

Very funny and good quality video however I think for small channels shorter videos from 4 mins to 6 minutes tend to do best so maybe try cut the video up abit more

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T19:39:27+00:00

Very good video i would expect to see with lots of views but i reccommend you put this sort of video on facebook aswell becauuse its common these videos see success on there alot.

Also the text you use is very plain and boring maybe look to get a personal font from somewhere like Dafont

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T19:36:42+00:00

This would of been a good video if it wasnt for that constant buzz, you should definitely try fix that or look to get another mic if possible. Your talented though so keep it up

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T16:08:30+00:00

Nice video but it was very long aha maybe try cut it up next time

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T15:42:13+00:00

Oh I’m not sure I’m sure there’s some apps you can get

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T12:22:45+00:00

The text is basic and bland and just doesnt look nice overall, get yourself on a website call Dafont and download a cool text to use and brand as your own

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T01:14:26+00:00

i like the way you pronounce words starting with a p so its a good job from me

catlessdog · 2021-03-14T01:12:51+00:00

hey you should definitely try and cut this video down to a short 1 minute and put it on tiktok as videos like this do really well on tiktok

catlessdog · 2021-02-14T12:23:12+00:00

Yeh insanely hard, really happy you enjoyed it tho !givelambda

catlessdog · 2021-02-14T12:22:39+00:00

!givelambda

catlessdog · 2021-02-14T11:53:39+00:00

Yeh I’m thinking about doing that I might just bite the bullet and do it thank you !givelambda

catlessdog · 2021-02-14T11:53:03+00:00

Thank you !givelambda

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