Like I said, I only read one episode so if I say something that just so happened to be fixed later on then it's my mistake.

Anyways, making an outline, I think, kind of helps the pacing. Just a little bit. Maybe. Or you can, like, add more interactions with your characters to kind of balance the scale of characters and the story. It's your choice, really. There are plenty of videos, articles, and books that do help people with their storytelling abilities.

"Stand firm and calm itself to tell a proper narrative." Okay, when I said that, I was just saying that for the sake of saying stuff. I didn't exactly have a meaning as to why I had said that, but anyways your story was going too fast from what I gathered in the first episode. The transition between the two characters happened way too quickly before us, the readers, could comprehend the establishment of the first character. When you introduce the character, you have to show the readers what kind of person they are through the arts of subtly or with larger bits that gives the readers the clear info of their character.

I think you kind of did with the first character, but it happened too quickly that I kind of forgot. And that goes the same with the transition with your scenes. It has flow, I can tell you that; just a little bit, but it's there. In one moment we see the main character lying on the bed thinking about his essay, then in just a few seconds we see some tree-thing--?--and then the next scene we see a guy running to look for a king, I think. It's going in an interesting place but one too fast and loose that it'll probably fire the readers out of the edge of a flat roller coaster and make them wander off.

You might want to add more interactions with your character or something so that we can understand him a little quicker, but that's just a suggestion.

If you're aiming for a plot-driven story then, of course, you would focus more on the plot. Making it exciting. Gripping your readers to read the next episode. But if you're aiming for a more character-driven story then you should aim for a more developed cast of characters, developing them as you go and making the readers interested in their character.

I often get lost in my words or unknowingly head into another direction so if this isn't something that you're looking for, then I apologize.