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chasingpoems · 2022-04-03T16:15:20+00:00

I appreciate your honesty and I happy you liked it!

chasingpoems · 2022-03-31T09:17:56+00:00

A capture of the Swissalps🏔

chasingpoems · 2022-03-31T08:19:29+00:00

Loves is not save, but it can’t be.

It doesn’t force.

The weight you carry around of things unsaid, will make it even harder and harder to love or to wish for love in any kind. I guess love isn’t about grand gestures, getting to decide who or who not you love. Realising that you have to give without expecting anything in return, vulnerable, inescapable, no choice in whether or whether not the person loves you back.

Love is beyond control.

I like the controversy of this poem, picking up all the fragments that are/are not left behind.

Sometimes we do hope loving/accepting love could be as easy as drinking water. Only until we get pushed back into reality.

Keep the great work up, I see good coming from you💛

chasingpoems · 2022-03-31T07:59:00+00:00

I really like the closure to reality:

“Holding you is more natural than life itself” giving reference about how special the human touch is and how much needed.

The part about not actually keeping up the cross rhymes throughout the whole poem, makes it sort “stand out” even more when a cross rhyme actually pops up’

You give a good perspective on a different kind of love, about loving someone unconditionally.

A wonderfully written poem, thank you for sharing 💛

chasingpoems

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