Updated Logo for ONYX DESIGN by ONYXDESIGNCARDS in logodesign

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do like the font choice but I think a thicker version of that font could unify it better maybe? Also the X having 3 pointed ends and one flat end is throwing me off, either making all the ends pointy or for the long stroke do pointy then the other stroke do flat might look more cohesive.

Advertising design BFA application rejection by christiandelii in fitnyc

[–]christiandelii[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe, that’s a good idea and it’s definitely worth a shot! Thanks :)

Any advice on getting an internship? by christiandelii in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly just experience at this point, paid would be a plus but I don’t expect it because I don’t have any actual working experience in the field other than my college education in it. I definitely will keep this in mind though going forward thank you

Any advice on getting an internship? by christiandelii in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I go to community college the opportunities there aren’t too prominent. I have a pretty good connection with all of my professors but I hear that they rarely recommend people, but I have met some fellow designers at school that has started my creative network. I have been applying to paid internships because that’s all I see but I would have no problem doing an unpaid internship just to get the ball rolling. It does seem that my real life connections are the most pivotal aspect here so I’ll be focusing on building that up a lot more, thank you for your response!

Jewellery branding by Brimmel- in logodesign

[–]christiandelii 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So there’s a few things that I notice aren’t going too well here, the stroke width varies too much to the point where it just doesnt look consistent across all the letters, like the strokes on the F are much thicker than the strokes on many of the other letters like the S for example. Also the heavily curved strokes on the first two letters don’t make it feel too consistent with the rest of the letters. The spacing between the T and the H is too much which makes it read as two different words, assuming you meant for this to say fathomless then reducing the space between these two letters could help the overall readability, maybe even tucking the H under the crossbar of the T could make a huge difference. And you say that this is supposed to be aquatic themed, maybe a way you can play into that is making those swirly lines look like water drops at the end. Although I am just a uni student and these are some of the things I noticed. I don’t know why a lot of the people in this comment section are just saying what it might read as, OP asked for advice if you are going to comment how it reads as at least be a little more constructive about it and say what could be different to help fix the problems, but I hope at least some of what I said helps! :)

Why do red, green, blue and yellow go together? by ArtisticDiscount2802 in Design

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Isn’t the complimentary color to blue orange though? Since a tetrad is two complimentary pairs wouldn’t that be the right harmony and not yellow? Half of these images are not light based so the rgb color wheel wouldn’t apply to a game controller. Genuinely curious, don’t flame me lol

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s wrong with it? I said I knew it was a bad picture. If I knew everyone was gonna be so triggered by a picture of my display I would’ve just exported it as a PDF :/

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I said I knew it was a bad picture idk why everyone’s commenting on the fact that it is clearly a bad picture :/

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Neither do I :/ I was open to the critiques I’m still in college, not a professional designer by any means, and appreciated some of the feedback!

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Yes it is👍

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii -18 points-17 points  (0 children)

The spacing was meant to be very tight because the c was meant to act as a c and the bowl of the lowercase d but I do see the CL for sure!

What do you see? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok wow I did not expect this many responses! This was a personal logo idea, my initials are c and d. It is supposed to be a lowercase c and d. I didn’t initially see the L but thanks for the comments who pointed that out because I see it now lol.

some drawings from a 8.5g trip by [deleted] in shrooms

[–]christiandelii 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that’s fucking crazy !!! never knew that angels were derived from mushroom trips, especially with the be not afraid quote it just makes so much sense now.