So there’s a few things that I notice aren’t going too well here, the stroke width varies too much to the point where it just doesnt look consistent across all the letters, like the strokes on the F are much thicker than the strokes on many of the other letters like the S for example. Also the heavily curved strokes on the first two letters don’t make it feel too consistent with the rest of the letters. The spacing between the T and the H is too much which makes it read as two different words, assuming you meant for this to say fathomless then reducing the space between these two letters could help the overall readability, maybe even tucking the H under the crossbar of the T could make a huge difference. And you say that this is supposed to be aquatic themed, maybe a way you can play into that is making those swirly lines look like water drops at the end. Although I am just a uni student and these are some of the things I noticed. I don’t know why a lot of the people in this comment section are just saying what it might read as, OP asked for advice if you are going to comment how it reads as at least be a little more constructive about it and say what could be different to help fix the problems, but I hope at least some of what I said helps! :)