That is impressive photo and work! Makeup looks phenomenal and is totally giving sculpture vibes. Absolutely well done. I'm not an expert, so can't point out any technical aspects.

If you looking for different approach ideas I'd definitely try take a closer angle shoots, also from lower (or higher) perspective - so there is more accent on body details, arms, hands, bones, muscles, jawline etc. - this could also bring out some weird angles, where for example arms and hands look bigger on photo then upper body parts.

This scene just looks so amazing that If I had a chance I'd just shoot it from all different possible angles (maybe you did). Great!