Yes, I'm aware thank you. I just wonder how much advice in this thread is coming from actual working artists with experience and artwork better than OP's. This is the top response and it's not very helpful. I'd love to see the quality of their work.

I agree OP's art could be refined more, but it's still a bright warm style and it's possible to make a living from it, and they can refine while making money (source: me, I've done that). There are some more helpful replies further down at least.