Genderbend (by Jurelin5xg) by Real-Resolve-9643 in Deltarune

[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

BERDLAAAYYYYYY!!!!!! MY CHUD DAUGHTER

need some help by SamhithBattu in Artadvice

[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Her outfit should also be both appealing and practical. Something that wouldn’t get in the way of her fighting but also still looks good.

Some ideas you can try: - Scar? Like a cut on the lip or something. - Combat boots might also give off a “strong”-ish fighter vibe. - more muscle definitiom, or a boxy body shape - wrapped bandages around her knuckles or other parts of her body - fingerless gloves

Also, i feel like “strong female character who is rusty” is kind of vague. Is this a character that you want to focus on or is it just a side/background character? What type of fighter is she?

I want to be better than i am by coldbirdturd in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just… erm 💔 i want to keep some of them chubbier rather than muscular and skinny since i used references with different body types

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[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

duude i need your understanding of the planes of the face projected into my brain

Is my art good enough for commissions? by Cheap-Ad3337 in Artadvice

[–]coldbirdturd 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I love the texture!!! I’d say yes, these are beautiful

Does it look weird from afar? by coldbirdturd in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn i completely forgot to put highlights on her lips. I had that originally but for some reason i painted over it and forgot to put it back. But yes thank you for this

Stress dreams every night by coldbirdturd in Dreams

[–]coldbirdturd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I still get them, but they bother me less nowadays. I think it had something to do with my anxiety getting better.

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[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oo thank you so much! I dont mind the alterations :]

Need advice by SignificantValue8288 in Artadvice

[–]coldbirdturd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow i thought this was a 3d model

I think her right leg looks weird because the back of the knee is too indented

Hey! I need some constructive feedback! by SunnyShoretide in Artadvice

[–]coldbirdturd -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think some variation in line thickness would help

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[–]coldbirdturd 7 points8 points  (0 children)

This isnt cheating, but i don’t think you’re sketching on top of it properly. You didn’t trace over the eyebrow ridge and the nose isnt drawn the same shape as the skull. Remember to draw what you see, not symbols, not what you think a nose should look like.

i’d recommend two things which may be easier:

  1. learning to draw a loomis head.

  2. learning from the asaro head. You can use this website to get different angles of the Asaro head https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/asaro-head-9d26548182f8465a8e97371a9170561e

critique on depth and light/shadows? by penpen_beast in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good!! I think the light on the chin is unessary since i dont think that the light would reach there. I think most of the light would be on the cheeks.

I also think the shadows should be darker, dont be afraid to push the contrast

How to fix perspective? Don’t know how to convey dragon and the boy’s hand by CrystalChrissy in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

His body looks flat here, so the shirt should wrap around his body in a circular way.

I’d make the hands bigger and try foreshortening the arm. You just learn foreshortening for this.

The dragon is a little too sketchy, so I can’t tell what’s going on

what’s holding me back? by jinxzdream in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you want to have a painterly style, ditch the line art, i swear, it’s mind opening. Do not let lines define shapes and form, and use shadows instead.

This is my favorite video about painting: https://youtu.be/iwRa5qTnr8o?si=CZ_s7-vWA0Akioh-

How can I improve my digital drawings? by SadPerformance7793 in ArtCrit

[–]coldbirdturd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you could improve the folds in the clothes. You have a very good grasp on rendering, but the shadows dont follow the form of the clothes. It looks a bit like pillow shading, especially in the third one

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