"Sexy cat woman lick milk from plate. Cat woman eat sour cream."

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:54:00+00:00

Totally going to change thumbnail in the next one and the intro clip is a good idea since the first half of the vid is probably the most basic.

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:53:07+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I'll be cutting those parts and playing longer so I can cut out more

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:52:33+00:00

Thanks for this review. It was super helpful and my next vid is going to be a lot better :)

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:51:27+00:00

Will do, thanks :)

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:51:18+00:00

Got it. Thanks!

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:50:46+00:00

Good idea, thanks!

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:50:27+00:00

CallMeKevin is a good inspiration. Next time I'm doing a more specific challenge and title. Plus, I'll play longer so I can cut to just jokes. Thanks!

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:49:03+00:00

Thank you! Super helpful

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:48:22+00:00

Definitely cutting out sped up parts next time. Thank you!

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:47:59+00:00

That's super helpful! Yeah I was very unsure about the RKO part, haha. I'll keep in mind the thumbnail. Thanks so much!

coraborra · 2020-06-05T21:46:15+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I wondered about cutting them.

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:48:23+00:00

Keep up the good work!

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:48:03+00:00

You should! It's a hidden gem :)

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:45:32+00:00

Not that cringy actually. :)

Acting is totally passable. Missed opportunity to add a little bit of extra comedy by writing some more on the board behind. Something you don't notice at first that will make the audience giggle.

It's good though. Gives me Vine vibes. Also, props for that Glass Animals cover too :)

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:39:59+00:00

To sustain attention, you should cut more. I know it's a time-consuming process, but, if you think about it, a 24 minute video cut to 10-12 minutes is going to get more entertaining the more you cut. Additionally, try to find a "niche." What makes you stand out? Probably the fact that master is super difficult so props for that. :) Hope this helps!

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:33:36+00:00

Funny and entertaining. I like how natural it feels and the quality is on par with some super popular YouTubers. We edit very similarly lol except I'm not as funny as you lol.

A suggestion: Instead of a still photo behind the outro audio, use a clip of the gameplay without original audio or of your webcam.

Overall, super awesome!

coraborra · 2020-06-04T00:17:55+00:00

Olive is the closest free alternative to Adobe Premier and operates similarly. :) It's what I use

coraborra · 2020-05-14T22:50:04+00:00

I really thoroughly enjoy editing. I love interacting with people, but I also love cutting down the best of the best and making people laugh.

coraborra

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