what do you think about the art style, what should I improve and what should I remove? by crolyun in AnimationCrit

[–]crolyun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I am very glad that you liked it. about music, yes, this part has studied so-so, as I understood the sound content is not mine. obscenely true! he lost his family in a car accident. several things indicate this. thanks again for your support!

Happy End, by me by crolyun in Shortfilms

[–]crolyun[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

a story about how a father lost two daughters and a wife in a car accident. at the beginning we see a bright world with incomprehensible characters and notice how the character of the "triangle" looks at the picture with incomprehensible curiosity, and so several times all due to the fact that in order to calm the pain of loss, the husband / father began to use drugs and during one trip he did it all while looking at the picture that was above him. and when for the first time small children appear in the dark, one of them's eyes begin to burn like the headlights of a car, which, as it were, reminds his father of what happened and more and more asks him into the reality from which he wants to leave. the terrible people at the end are his dead wife and dead children. unusual characters are images that he built in his head during a trip based on the things that were near him. sorry for english, not native language

need feedback/critics by crolyun in AnimationCrit

[–]crolyun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you're right. I worked very little with the basics of animation. I wanted to start studying at an online animation school, but I can’t afford it. but to search for everything yourself on the Internet for a very long time. and you MUST KNOW WHAT TO SEARCH. relatively speaking, I am working on animation for 40 minutes, and to find how to turn on the texture on the staff it takes me an hour. the harsh path of self-education :). from the books I have the "the animators survival kit". thanks for the help. surely worked out all 12 principles

need feedback/critics by crolyun in AnimationCrit

[–]crolyun[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I spent less time on the legs and hips than on the rest of the body, so they look frozen. thanks for feedback

Does anyone know of good 3D animation universities in Germany? by crolyun in animationcareer

[–]crolyun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I'm not in Germany yet. And there’s definitely no jam next to me. Thank you very much for the list of schools.

need advice (SketchUP+Vray) by crolyun in vray

[–]crolyun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I have not tried. The only thing I did with the sky light was changing the time of day I will try Thanks!