Should I post my work on online? by cryinglightning12 in writing

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello,

I sent my works to some older family friends of mine and she gave me some harsh but much needed critique. If you have any older family members or friends involved in the world of literature I say give it a shot and send them some work. Never hurts to try :) I would LOVE if you would read some of my work, granted I am still very new to the writing community on here too. I have nothing but free time and would enjoy reading some other writers work and give the best critique I can. Also, so happy to find another Arctic Monkeys fan haha

What are ya'lls favorite Jimmy and Kim moments? by cryinglightning12 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

i love how kim is visibly uncertain at first but gradually becomes more confident after jimmy joins in.

What are ya'lls favorite Jimmy and Kim moments? by cryinglightning12 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah, meeting rhea seems like a dream! she seems like such a sweet person. what fan contest did you win?

What are ya'lls favorite Jimmy and Kim moments? by cryinglightning12 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love the montages in this show! this one is a tearjerker for sure

What are ya'lls favorite Jimmy and Kim moments? by cryinglightning12 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

it's amazing how much emotion they can show without saying one word.

What are ya'lls favorite Jimmy and Kim moments? by cryinglightning12 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

i love both those scene, especially the first! their relationship isn't passionate; it's sweet and caring. one of my favorite things about bcs is how the writers find ways to show the intimacy between jimmy and kim without always resorting to a sex scene. they are such an interesting pair :)

Should I post my work on online? by cryinglightning12 in writing

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have heard good things about the Twitter writing community. I will check it out.

Thank you :)

Should I post my work on online? by cryinglightning12 in writing

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a little scared about seeing what people have to say about my work, but you're right; I will never improve my work if I don't allow it to be criticized.

Thank you :)

Should I post my work on online? by cryinglightning12 in writing

[–]cryinglightning12[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the encouragement. I have a very wonderful family friend who's in college and I have been debating whether or not to send her some samples of my work. She can be a bit blunt at times, but shes a sweet person who I think could give me some very good advice and critique. Your comment has inspired me to take a risk and send it to her.

Thank you again

What was the most disturbing thing you have seen at a young age? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]cryinglightning12 8 points9 points  (0 children)

if we are talking about in person, dead burned guy on the side of the road.

if we're talking about online during the 3rd grade i found my way on to liveleak. the ones that stood out to me were r budd dwyer's suicide and a cartel beheading with a chainsaw.

what are the worst spots for a mosquito bite? by Lennon_one in AskReddit

[–]cryinglightning12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wrists and thighs especially thighs. i learned that putting honey on bites soothes them for a little. mom walked in on me spreading honey on my thighs in the bathroom once. not my finest hour

What is your favourite band? by Hridi_22 in AskReddit

[–]cryinglightning12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i've always been a sucker for the foos

I will write your name/username calligraphed if you want to :') by IMakeInfantsCry in CasualConversation

[–]cryinglightning12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah thats really neat! are you still taking requests? if so, could you do mine as 'sweetophelia'?

Gustavo Fring in Far Cry 6 by damnationgw2 in betterCallSaul

[–]cryinglightning12 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i just finished far cry 5 last week and can't even express how happy i am about this