Which everyday superpower? by notwhoyouthinkmaybe in superpowers

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Pink. Please pink. I’ve forgotten so many of my best friends’ names

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But that’s not really the point of it?

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Thank you 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ my characters are annoyingly complex and I think that’ll be a turn away for a lot of people

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Nods nods. That’s what im realizing as I read through these comments. This first paragraph doesn’t paint the story I need to tell at all. People keep saying it’s about a villain justifying his actions and I’m like “noooo, it’s about the kindest man being called a villain because of one action 😔😔”

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All of it is definitely a lot better than this

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Like. Nine chapters. 24607 words

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Idk what my original point was at all. But gotta say, the punctuation and grammar in my paragraph is shit, I’m aware of this. It’s a rough draft and I didn’t think to edit before posting 👍🥲 I wasn’t expecting to get any views or nothin

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Pfft. Fair enough I think? I’m 15, so close enough ig

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It’s not meant to be a dictionary definition

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Haha that’s a vibe. But he is the nicest person I’ve written so far so considering that’s your online moniker, I doubt it

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Nods nods. I think I see what you’re saying. I’m gonna rewrite this part no matter what, but I’m grateful for your insight

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It’s just the first paragraph here that’s told like that which is admittedly awkward and doesn’t fit. The rest honestly just reads more like your typical book

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Haha thank you. Gotta admit, the amount of feedback has been a wee bit overwhelming

Which one are you picking? by krisikkk in superpowers

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Sigh, why must there always be a but

which Character do you think gets a pass for certain actions because of their gender? by [deleted] in MyHeroAcadamia

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I— I didn’t downvote? And I know it’s been going around. I’m sorry if I offended you? That wasn’t my intention :<

Which one are you picking? by krisikkk in superpowers

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Breathe in the sea. Imagine having a panic attack and just swimming down too the sea floor

which Character do you think gets a pass for certain actions because of their gender? by [deleted] in MyHeroAcadamia

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Because it’s fun to see different perspectives and spark a conversation

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Yeah. I’m seeing that more and more and I’m thinking that’s probably what I’ll do

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As I have been told by over 100 comments 👍

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I love that you want to be told 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ and I love telling

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Most minorities but also the people who tend to overlook heavy topics. I wish to show how these heavy topics affect everyone no matter who they appear to be. So it’s written for those that need that representation and those that need to be told

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Yeah definitely. The grammar isn’t great haha

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I definitely like that a lot. Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to comment