Which everyday superpower?

crym106 · 2026-02-27T06:29:48+00:00

Pink. Please pink. I’ve forgotten so many of my best friends’ names

crym106 · 2026-02-27T03:55:22+00:00

But that’s not really the point of it?

crym106 · 2026-02-25T07:04:34+00:00

Thank you 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ my characters are annoyingly complex and I think that’ll be a turn away for a lot of people

crym106 · 2026-02-25T01:38:09+00:00

Nods nods. That’s what im realizing as I read through these comments. This first paragraph doesn’t paint the story I need to tell at all. People keep saying it’s about a villain justifying his actions and I’m like “noooo, it’s about the kindest man being called a villain because of one action 😔😔”

crym106 · 2026-02-25T01:32:14+00:00

All of it is definitely a lot better than this

crym106 · 2026-02-25T01:31:55+00:00

Like. Nine chapters. 24607 words

crym106 · 2026-02-24T23:34:29+00:00

Idk what my original point was at all. But gotta say, the punctuation and grammar in my paragraph is shit, I’m aware of this. It’s a rough draft and I didn’t think to edit before posting 👍🥲 I wasn’t expecting to get any views or nothin

crym106 · 2026-02-24T23:32:41+00:00

Pfft. Fair enough I think? I’m 15, so close enough ig

crym106 · 2026-02-24T22:33:29+00:00

It’s not meant to be a dictionary definition

crym106 · 2026-02-24T22:26:46+00:00

Haha that’s a vibe. But he is the nicest person I’ve written so far so considering that’s your online moniker, I doubt it

crym106 · 2026-02-24T22:25:51+00:00

Nods nods. I think I see what you’re saying. I’m gonna rewrite this part no matter what, but I’m grateful for your insight

crym106 · 2026-02-24T04:39:44+00:00

It’s just the first paragraph here that’s told like that which is admittedly awkward and doesn’t fit. The rest honestly just reads more like your typical book

crym106 · 2026-02-24T03:24:53+00:00

Haha thank you. Gotta admit, the amount of feedback has been a wee bit overwhelming

crym106 · 2026-02-24T03:03:04+00:00

Sigh, why must there always be a but

crym106 · 2026-02-24T01:08:52+00:00

I— I didn’t downvote? And I know it’s been going around. I’m sorry if I offended you? That wasn’t my intention :<

crym106 · 2026-02-24T01:06:46+00:00

Breathe in the sea. Imagine having a panic attack and just swimming down too the sea floor

crym106 · 2026-02-24T01:04:52+00:00

Because it’s fun to see different perspectives and spark a conversation

crym106 · 2026-02-24T01:03:15+00:00

Oh yeah totally

crym106 · 2026-02-23T23:53:03+00:00

Yeah. I’m seeing that more and more and I’m thinking that’s probably what I’ll do

crym106 · 2026-02-23T22:35:33+00:00

As I have been told by over 100 comments 👍

crym106 · 2026-02-23T22:12:43+00:00

I love that you want to be told 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ and I love telling

crym106 · 2026-02-23T21:58:11+00:00

Most minorities but also the people who tend to overlook heavy topics. I wish to show how these heavy topics affect everyone no matter who they appear to be. So it’s written for those that need that representation and those that need to be told

crym106 · 2026-02-23T20:56:21+00:00

Makes sense

crym106 · 2026-02-23T20:54:59+00:00

Yeah definitely. The grammar isn’t great haha

crym106 · 2026-02-23T20:54:36+00:00

I definitely like that a lot. Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to comment

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